Both 1. and 2. look OK to me. In Number 2., maybe you could say 'geared towards ' instead of 'geared for'? Maybe someone else can advise you on this.

I am delighted to see your job posting on {advertisement} for the above position, and would like to learn more about this opportunity. I recently graduated from the University of ***** with a successful academic record , having attaine d 2

Until today , I did not know what the expression ' a true fan ' meant . When he plays on TV, I can drop everything I do in order to watch him play. Almost every time he makes a shot, I clasp my hand s . Sometimes when he gets a foul, I think the

I enjoyed our meeting and discussion regarding your career in finance. Thank you for taking the time to attend SLU on November 1-3. Your advice to produce a product that showcases my hard work and dedication, and to acquire a CFA, is very well

Do you have the rest of the sentence or paragraph?

I would like to introduce myself as the new coordinator . I have taken over the role from ***. *** informs/has informed me that you are one of our most valued partners . I tried to contact you to see if we can organise some courses after Nov. -

I believe 'to' never follows 'avoid'. Examples: 'I avoid going to the doctor and dentist because I'm scared of needles.' 'He has a bad temper. It's better to avoid making him angry.'

When I worked as a medical typist, the doctors and specialists always used 'show' in that way. It looks quite natural and normal, to me. If its a medical piece of writing, I guess maybe you should leave them in, as some medical professionals get

Kate, I think this is what the first item means: An important Russian businessman (Mr Khodorkovsky) is being tried in Russia for tax evasion and fraud. Critics say he is being tried because he has criticised the Russian government. Because

we want to have confirmation that a timer/schedule control will be provided and installed with the lighting system. You can say 'want confirmation'; but would like or maybe need is more polite You can remove 'to have'. But the sentence