Honey reached me with the heat in the transit making it all the more tastier. The sizzle in me kept the warmth foaming. The shy look from the corner of your eye was enough to tell me that you liked it too as much as I did

Please do write a word or two when you stop by. Thanks.

Friends, please take time to atleast write a line when you come to read the poem. Thank you.

The white shell broke into tiny pieces spreading the liquid around sticky to the core with a round ball in the middle slimy to touch and foul smelling too. I stood there watching what could have been the last hope of a hen to yield to another of

It's not me It’s not me. It has been you all along. My heart is not mine when it beats for you. My breath is not mine when it breathes for you. The scarlet letter that I sent was written with blood shed for you. The

The jingling of the anklets of the flowery feet was heard by the deaf man. The bright face with the elegant tresses opened the eyes of the blind man. The silky melody from the lustrous lips brought ‘wow’ to the mouth of the

This is a good poem. A few suggestions to help you. Maybe you can try to eliminate the 'like' word in all the lines and directly use metaphors which would make it a more interesting poem.You can start with 'You are a book'. And maybe you can

Hello Lauren, This is a good start.Would be good if you can elaborate the poem by bringing out more of the realtionship into it. I liked the line 'I hate it when I'm day and he's night'. This is a good line to show how different you both are.

It is a good one though all your emotions about love have been spoken of many times. I liked the ending line, 'love is unconditional like the air we breathe'.

Why do we remember God only in times of crisis? At least I do.I don't get time to pray regularly or on a dialy basis.But when Igo through someproblem or crisis,I do remember to say a prayer.And defend myself saying that if God is really