Hi Guest, please review the top post in this section. MountainHiker

Paco2004, 'To prepare for writing a paper' works here as an adjunctive (purpose-adverbial) to 'began compiling a list of quotes'. Thank you. That is exactly what I was looking for. This is my humble opinion, but I'm afraid it might

Hi, Sorry, but your writing is not natural sounding. I don't mind fine-tuning an essay here and there, but your essay needs rewriting. For example, you first sentence now is worse than it was before. "Being about to complete my BA programme

Yes, that is the correct post to read.

Hi, For some reason my brain is freezing up on me. To prepare for writing a paper , I began compiling a list of quotes. What is the italicized portion referred as? MountainHiker

Hi, Of the two drafts you have given, I like the second one better. I don't know anything about your industry. But if I had to make some shot in the dark comments, I would say this: 1) Aren't "agents" done by word of mouth? If so, find a

Dear Sir or Madam: Having completed my Bachelor’s degree programme of International Business, I am eager to apply for the postgraduate *basketweaving* programme of XXX at your university. I have been consistently applying my best efforts

matthewg, Excellent and thorough advice throughout. Just one small point...in North America "scrutineer" is a more commonly used word than is "rapporteur". Nona the brit and I run into this frequently. Something that sounds odd to me sounds

The second top most post has been revised slightly. Please Post:56404 . MountainHiker

Hi, No, unfortunately we won't revise your essay. That's a lot of work and effort. If you want to try to rewrite it by first creating an outline and then writing paragraphs for your outline, we will try to help. MountainHiker