can you please write a letter to the judge / parole board for a parole violation for my boyfriend. No. Please Post:46521 . You must write the letter. Also, I strongly suggest removing names in your post. This stuff will be indexed by

Dear Christopher, Thank you for your e-mail. Unfortunately, I haven't received any of the previous e-mails you sent' consequently, I haven't received the Schedule for the Training Program. Regarding the documentation, I'm afraid I won't be able

Hi Fio, Thank you for your reply. Your letter still appears very chaotic to me. First, you need to have spaces between your paragraphs. As it is now, it is all jammed together and gives the impression of being overly busy. Second, you

Hi, It is better but it still needs a lot of work. As I read through your letter, I am trying to pick up the key themes or attributes, and I am finding it difficult. You need to reduce the clutter and make your statements more direct. For

Dear Sharon: Recently, I was in an elevator with another person going between floors. This person said, "You are a very attractive woman. Would you like to go out on a date with me?" "No, thank you," I laughed. "I do not want to go out on

Welcome fio, What are you applying to? Your letter is very chaotic. I have no idea from the letter what you are trying to accomplish. MountainHiker

Welcome Roberta to English Forums. When writing a business letter, imagine you're in an elevator with the other person going between floors. What are the five or less key thoughts you want to leave the other person with? Those are your topics.

Out of curiousity, what's the English question?

Dear Srs of the Admissions Comitee, Having majored in Industrial Microbiology I would like to specialize in Plant Sciences and learn more about bioremediation, biological control and plant breeding. During my last year[] of high school I

Hi, It's hard enough helping people with the letters without creating our own. You need to write your own letter and then someone will likely jump in and assist. MountainHiker