Minor corrections only. Try: "Dear Jane, Thank you for attending the 'MGDT' training seminar in Malaysia. We have posted a set of CompuSoft’s Product and Services Catalogs with the Evaluation CD to you today. They will be delivered to

In your sentence, "meanders in an almost religious nature" means the book is supposed to be a rigorous and logical discussion on philosophy, but instead, it inclines toward discussing about religion (which is not rigorous or logical). Chris

Aspire is attempting to achieve a specific (usually lofty and long term) goal, whereas desire is wishing/hoping/wanting something. For example, in describing someone's ambition: "He aspires to be the next Prime Minister" Yes, you

Now, the Sun is happy. Showing its face for the world to see. With its shining rays. Greeting the world with its warm embrace. Hello world, the Sun says. She has been waiting for the Sun. In the rain. Patiently. And now that the Sun is out, she

Because it is possible that both "you" and "John" may like "this", I would choose "Do either ..." although I understand that "either" is one or the another (but not both). I also realise some are

No, I would write them as: "No two cars or two logos from two different companies can be the same." Chris

"has shared in a committment to continued education" means the Peavey Sound Reinforcement Program is a program organised by people committed to ongoing education/teaching in music and sound. So by participating in that program, LY HONG

Nice writing flair! I made some minor tweaks, following your style. Here goes: It's hard for her to tell him how much she misses him. On the phone, he says: I miss you terribly. Silence. Only a thank-you could be heard not long after. But she

"Be it known that" is just a wordy, almost pompous, and unnecessary phrase to introduce something, in this case, the name of a person, LY HONG. "has shared in a committment to continued education" means LY HONG has supported by

You should put the adverb closer to the verb. So (a) He is carefully cutting (his?) long finger nails. (b) He is carefully cutting (his?) long finger nails with nail clippers. Chris