Highlighted the more glaring issues for you. I could tell that my friend was excited by the looks of her face. Natalie was going in for the talent contest, American Idol, which was a famous worlwide TV competition.She was always lack of

Very good points. Just some grammatical problems here and there. I've highlighted some of them for you. I'm sorry to hear about your problem. When I was a Form 4 student, I faced the same problem too.Don't be upset about this.

Just highlighted a few things for you to fix. Jing-Mei's mother in Two Kinds, the story by Amy Tan, is a very important character who has the power to dominate the story. Jing-Mei is a narrator who tells readers her perspective and

Did anyone watch her match against Kim Clijsters? What a bizarre way to end that match!

Hi Benny, If you're dividing the types of probems into sections, I don't think there's a need to color-code. Just visually separate the sections and keep it short and sweet. Just my humble opinion, of course!

Highlighted a few things for you to fix. In the middle of game my younger brother came up to me and asks if he can play with us. He was very energetic and excited to play with my friends, but in back of my mind I was thinking that he can get

Just a few glaring issues... “Solitude, Spending Time Alone Is One Of Our Best Teachers.” A human being begins his life by his parents’ side. He learns about right and wrong, and then moves on with his life , he starts school, finds