I think your statement will read better if you tie the various issues together. e.g. You said this is a responsibility to yourself and a commitment to others. Could you elaborate on that? You have mentioned your coursework. Could you explain in

Highlighted a few things that need fixing. I support the opinion that (The question asks for your opinion. YOu are not asked to support someone else's opinion) colleges have no such requirement. The reason is that university is the

Hi Benny, Welcome to EF. I've noticed your comments are in various colors. Do the colors mean anything?

Nothing can replace it! (the chocolate, not my head.) So what can replace your head, then? Inquiring minds, you know! Your question reminds me of the Learnean Hydra with his/her many replaceable heads. (I guess Hercules could say,

How about a bake-off? You'll only get a half-baked solution from me. Since you and I are on the same side, I choose "knit-off" and my job is to hold the yarn. I'll just keep the thread from unravelling...

Ouch. My head hurts. :-( I'm not good enough to be an arbiter, but could I add a few scenarios for discussion purposes? Let's say, my father gave me a vase. I love the vase very much, but my cat broke it yesterday. The vase is

Highlighted a few things that need some work. Necklace is the story about a very poor woman's huge life changes by encountering a necklace. The woman, named Mathilde Loisel who is poor and married a clerk, is described as a pretty woman

You went back and forth between present tense and past tense.

the creation Heaven and Earth or basically things like the sun, moon, and the stars , (punctuation) (You might want to use "First", "Second", and "Third" for each similarity.) they both discuss the creation of man in

misses the important points (of what?) if he is absent. She thinks it (what is interesting) is interesting. he was given a B. not quantity (of what) . people who don’t ask questions in the class