Hi Jesse, Here's my suggestion: "We could only start an academic relationship if I'm accepted to study at the University."

Hi sweety, Your essay was quite well written. You just had a few recurring mistakes like 'later marriage' and 'families poverty'. Girls’ Education The need for education has been felt all over the world in recent years. However, a large

If they don't feel love for each other I wouldn't use the word 'interested'. "As soon as they met, they felt a mutual respect.'

Hi French girl, You need to define 'he' and 'they', otherwise you leave the reader confused. "After this meeting, he decides to go and visit Biko in Kings William town. As soon as they see each other, they feel respect and friendship on

As native speaker I'd use 'about' when the agent is 'I' to express regret. For instance, if I'm at a funeral, I'd tell the parents of the dead person, 'I'm sorry about your son.' Sometimes I would use it to avoid sounding directly apologetic, for

Ok, I know what you mean by shear force. Because shear can also mean 'to cut', but you're right, it does refer to a specific force.

Isn't it 'sheer force'? (As in 'sheer force of will') Sunshine, It might be that you always use 'grindable', but this is the first time I've seen it used, and I think the word you mean to use is friable .

Yes, 'for' is more appropriate in the second example. But if someone else is the agent, I'd say, 'I'm sorry about the loss of your book'. i.e. 'I regret that your book was lost.'

Hi Chreal, This essay is very badly written. There is no structure to the argument. I've tried to correct the English, but I can't rewrite the whole essay for you. Here are some links that should help you: Guide to Writing a Basic Essay -

Hi Komountain, I use 'sorry for' when I'm admiting that I'm at fault. I use 'sorry about' when I'm expressing regret, or when I'm when I'm excusing myself. 'I'm sorry for shouting at you. There was no need for me to get so angry.' 'I'm