Hi, Can you please corret my grammr in this sentance: Children and adolescents can sit every day in front of the television and consume the one commercial after the other one another about food that is rich in fat and sugar.

No, it's not optional, because it is part of the association's name.

hexon is not a word as far as I know and I couldn't find it in the dictionary. Where did you see it?

As they are married she is either Ms Obama or Mrs Obama, whichever she prefers (I don't know). Before they married she was either Ms (last name) or Miss (last name), whichever she preferred.

traffic is not appropriate because it means there are too many vehicles. They usually tell you something specific to that situation e.g.engineering works, fault on the line, signalling fault and so on.

Hi, Do I draw someone's attention to something, yes or draw something to someone's attention? no, but you can bring something to someone's attention Thanks in advance

Hi, Do I draw someone's attention to something, yes or draw something to someone's attention? no, but you can bring something to someone's attention Thanks in advance

Could oyu say the follwoing sentences and if not how would you say them? 1 The traffic on the subway is slowed down this morning due to a jumper 'traffic' is used for road vehicles not trains. 'jumper' is rather callous

I'm sorry but we cannot give you advice on this - it is far outside the purpose and area of expertise of this forum. I would suggest you contact the government body responsible for visas for accurate advice.

the OP will be 17 years old - perhaps someone from the US can tell us which Grade that corresponds to.