Then"yes" becomes an interjection, and so can go pretty much anywhere parenthetically - that is, without regard to the grammar of the rest of the sentence. As such, you should separate it off with commas on both sides of "yes".

The comma should perhaps be a semicolon or a colon or a period. Apart from that, it seems fine to me. Rommie

assertion, I just don't capitalize words derived from proper nouns. It's a rommie-eccentricity ...
, it is not a religious slight. Rommie

functioning hearts). Anyway, we AIs don't have hearts, but we still have feelings. Rommie

different, for example. Rommie

an eyelid - unless you needed it to terminate the sentence, obviously. Rommie

Grammatically, yes. But I would not like to be on the recieving end of such an instruction.

months". Rommie

it can do so. Rommie

also change the word "when". Replace it with "while" (American) or "whilst" (British). Rommie