http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=user%3ababyblue%3fgirl08&o=DateDescendingSearch results for 'user:babyblue?girl08'en-USXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanKindlyCheckParagraph/hnmxb/post.htmFri, 23 Jan 2009 05:14:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:652223babyblue_girl08Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Can someone check this paragraph for me. I know it has a lot of mistake in this paragraph. Hope someone can check this for me. Well thanks in advance. Many theorists throughout history have argued which is more effective, punishment or rehabilitation. In this society has many of the criminal justice system is to punish and rehabilitate individuals who commit crime. The first thing we should do for the person who commits crime should put in jail. That is the retributive theory seeks to punish offenders because they deserve to be punished. Put in jail or prison is the good idea so we can prevent her/him from committing another crime for a specified period. In this assignment I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectGrammarVerbTense/hrxvz/post.htm#589956Thu, 20 Nov 2008 17:15:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589956babyblue_girl08thanks! if you have time can you check this essay for me please? Dear Supervisor, First of all I would like to thanks for sending the information and DVD about the military. After I had read some information about this I decided not to join in this activity. So I would like to let you know that, that is why I wrote this letter to you. I want you to remove my name and address in your list. I also want you to let your recruiters know about this, because they kept following me every time I’m at campus. Can you guys stop calling me because it so annoying and I know you know that. I been avoided the call every time you guys calling me. I hope you will understand me. That is my private life if I don’t want to join the military. I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpCorrectEssay/hbrkr/post.htmThu, 20 Nov 2008 05:43:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589730babyblue_girl08i really need help on this one. Can someone kindly edit my essay for me? Please! Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Dear Supervisor, First of all I would like to thanks for sending the information and DVD about the military. After I had read some information about this I decided not to join in this activity. So I would like to let you know that, that is why I wrote this letter to you. I want you to remove my name and address in your list. I also want you to let your recruiters know about this, because they kept following me every time I’m at campus. Can you guys stop calling me because it so annoying and I know you know that. I been avoided the call every time you guys calling me. I hope you will...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectGrammarVerbTense/hrxvz/post.htm#589583Thu, 20 Nov 2008 00:36:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589583babyblue_girl08Hi Scott! thank you so much for correction my essay. i really appreaciated it. By the way my name is trixie and nice to meet you.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectGrammarVerbTense/hrxvz/post.htmTue, 18 Nov 2008 05:33:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:588766babyblue_girl08Can someone check my Narrative essay? I know it had a lot mistake there. So please help me.Thanks in advance. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 The Life of My Brother I know life become harder and harder each day. Every one of us had experienced the hardship and struggling in life. In my life time I never forgot my brother had sacrificed his life for us. It been almost nine years but I never forgot the day he dropped out the school. After my dad passed away he decided to drop out of school just to help my mom with our expenses of daily life. In the Philippines, June is the month of the children goes back to school. Before the school started he, my younger sister, and me went to school to register the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpMeThisParagraphPlease/hrwll/post.htm#587501Fri, 14 Nov 2008 08:08:07 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:587501babyblue_girl08thank you AlpheccaStars!!! you really help me a lot.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpMeThisParagraphPlease/hrwll/post.htmThu, 13 Nov 2008 07:43:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:587157babyblue_girl08help me to check my grammar and verb tense please. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 I also had experienced like her too. When my first day in United States my family and I lived at San Diego for two months. While we live on that place my grand uncle who lives in Stockton called us and invited us to move in his place. It took two or three weeks my mom decided to move in Stockton. When my mom plans to go, she told to my grand auntie that we all going to move nest week. My grand auntie heard that she mad at us and she didn’t talk to us for three days. Finally the day is came and we all packed all our stuff to ready for our new life in the new place. On that day we woke up so early and I’m glad that my grand...http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarVerbTenseCheck/gqxgq/post.htm#584274Thu, 06 Nov 2008 03:53:07 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:584274babyblue_girl08Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 thank you so much for always cheking my writing. Here i edited my paragraph. All they eyes were looked on her and asked “Nina, what did you do?” she said she didn’t do anything. Suddenly her auntie Ashie yelled at her and ask ed her to apologize to her mom. Her auntie pushed her toward her mom to say sorry. But her mom did not mad at her at all. She also adds everything seemed fine after she said sorry to her mom but her auntie start to scolded and yelled at her in their native language. Nina said, she was scared at her auntie shark voice. When Nina apologized to her mom and she gave her a hugged. Then she ran to her room, over there she cried some more and talk to her...http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarVerbTenseCheck/gqxgq/post.htmWed, 05 Nov 2008 06:55:20 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:583898babyblue_girl08hi everyone i need help for this paragraph. Can someone check my grammar and verb tenses? please! Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 In the essay” Wreck the Hall with Antique Vases”, written by Nina Penalosa, she states that she got blamed for broken the vases even she didn’t do it. That accident when she was four year old and she never forget the detail on that night. On the Christmas Eve her cousin Cynthia and her sister Nikki was playing in the hallway near to her mom fragile collections. But unfortunately they accident hit one of antique vases of Nina mom. When she heard the sound and looked into the hallway. She saw Cynthia and Nikki quickly ran to the safely place and left her alone in the hallway. When...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyPoorWriting/gqgkp/post.htm#582000Fri, 31 Oct 2008 01:55:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:582000babyblue_girl08thank you for checking my essay. if you have time, can you proofread my 3 -5 paragraph. I'm sure there have a lot verb tense mistake there.can you help me to fix it? anyway thank you so much for fixing my essay. i really appreciated it.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyPoorWriting/gqgkp/post.htmThu, 30 Oct 2008 06:23:31 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:581653babyblue_girl08Can someone check my verb tense in this essay. i haven been struggle with the verb tenses, and please check my grammar too. i really appreciated it. When Bad Things Happen to Good People In the book” When Bad Thing Happen to Good People”, by Harold S. Kushner, it talks about God. In this book Harold wrote lots about God and human being. The topic I chose to read was “God Leaves Us Room to Be Human and “God Can’t Do Everything but He Can Do Some Important Things”. In the chapter of God Leaves Us Room to Be Human, it talks about God has gave us a feeling to feel what is bad and good. The author states that we are human being was suffered that situation is because of Adam and Ave. As we start learning the bible we need to know a story...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckGrammar/gqccb/post.htm#580571Mon, 27 Oct 2008 02:53:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580571babyblue_girl08AlpheccaStars thank you so much. I will follow what did you said.I really appreciated that you are helped me to correcting this essay.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckGrammar/gqccb/post.htm#580523Sun, 26 Oct 2008 22:00:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580523babyblue_girl08Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 Thank you so much for correction my essay. I really appreciated it. Here I edited my rest of essay but I'm sure there were a lot mistake. Can check it where i got mistake? Anyway thanks so much for correction my essay. When my mom done packed everything, we five people carrying the stuff and ran, but we didn’t know where to run to. In our village is near to the airport, so we run toward there. When we reached there we hugged each other and started to cried. I saw lots people were screaming for help because they didn’t carry any things important in their. Some people have nothing in their hand. They lost everything and all the money they had been saving for many years....http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckGrammar/gqccb/post.htmSun, 26 Oct 2008 07:43:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580347babyblue_girl08Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 This is a Description essay? I had rewrite this a couple of time but i still struggle in verb tense and grammar. So can guys please help me out? One Night as Changed Our Life When my childhood I had experienced a tragic life. On night that had changed my family and people life on the village. We live in the camp in the Palawan of the Philippines because we are refugee there. That big accident I will never forget in my life. I remember all the details in the accident happen. On that time I was 7 year old. I had see the big fired in my life I ever seen before. That fired made a lot people suffered. People lost their house and important things in their life were gone as...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseGrammarMistakesVerbTense/gppvd/post.htm#580342Sun, 26 Oct 2008 07:32:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:580342babyblue_girl08thank you very much for the advice and thanks for your time checking my essay. I really appreciated it. if you have time. can you check this one too? When my childhood I had experienced a tragic life. On night that had changed my family and people life on the village. We live in the camp in the Palawan of the Philippines because we are refugee there. That big accident I will never forget in my life. I remember all the details in the accident happen. On that time I was 7 year old. I had see the big fired in my life I ever seen before. That fired made a lot people suffered. People lost their house and important things in their life were gone as well. It also made our family life up and down. Even though it been fourteen year but I still...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseGrammarMistakesVerbTense/gppvd/post.htmThu, 23 Oct 2008 06:50:51 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:579227babyblue_girl08Liz Mahler 11.5606 Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 I need help to this report for my music class. Concert Report of STKN Symphony This concert it classics II and it take place at Atherton Auditorium on Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 8:00 pm. On this concert the conductor is Peter Jaffe and the special guest is Tai Murray, the violinist. When the time is came they started play the first piece in this concert, it called Night on Bald Mountain. This piece is the most popular in orchestra tone poem. It the D- Minor and arranged by Rimsky-Korsakov. The tone is seemed like a ternary form to be, because they keep repeated the sound. Then in the middle of the piece all the trombone or woodwind instruments...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckGrammar/gxrwq/post.htmThu, 25 Sep 2008 00:17:48 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:570060babyblue_girl08I hope someone will help me to check my grammar. I know it has hundred mistake there. So please help me this paragraph. Thanks advance,I really appreciated it. Normal 0 false false false MicrosoftInternetExplorer4 In the "A Circus", by Carry Farruggia. The author writes about the circus. Circus is the event on the holidays, Birthday, etc.She said circus is the opportunity to reunion Farruggia family. In the event it had several roles. Such as like, Lion Tamer, Clowns, Animals a snack at the circus. In Farruggia circus, they have their own roles in the plays. The Ring leader role of the family is taken by her husband, Matt. The Ring leader role is start the party started. She also said her husband role is to...Wed, 17 Sep 2008 00:44:55 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:566947babyblue_girl08Uploaded on Wednesday, September 17, 2008http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanGuysCorrectPlease/gcrgj/post.htmThu, 08 May 2008 03:32:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511063babyblue_girl08i need correction for my paragraph,could someone help, please! In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to City of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his neighbors concerns about missing lights in their area. He have mentions some crime that happened in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappointed to the City of Stockton because since lots of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any actions. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want it just a street light so that they can be safe. After reading this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t need to worry about the street light and left the house with no one watch over it. Back in the Philippines I have...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ThisNarrativeEssay/zpxnv/post.htm#510173Tue, 06 May 2008 03:10:50 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510173babyblue_girl08Hi! Susankay, Can I ask a favor? Can you please check this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this for my English class and by the way thanks for edit my essay. My teacher already accept my paper,I really appreciated it. In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his neighbor concerns about missing light in their area. He had mentions some crime that happen in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappoint to the city of Stockton because since too many of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any action. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want just a street light so that they can be safe. After read this letter, I...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbmjn/post.htm#510154Tue, 06 May 2008 01:43:12 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510154babyblue_girl08i know,that why im here to ask help and i think i can't fix all my mistake,beacuse i need to pass it for tomorrow and English is my third language that why i'm so poor of it.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbmjn/post.htm#510145Tue, 06 May 2008 01:24:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:510145babyblue_girl08i know, i have a huge problem with the verb tense. can i ask a favor? if you don't mind can you fix it for me? Can u change the verb tenses for me? Because i really need it for tomorrow in English class. Can u please help me?http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneParagraph/gbmjn/post.htmMon, 05 May 2008 06:17:21 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:509673babyblue_girl08hi everyone, can u guys please this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my engllish class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advance In the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he tells about his concerns and his neighbor concerns about missing light in their area. He had mentions some crime that happen in their area because of the failure of the street light. I feel disappoint to the city of Stockton because since too many of letter had sent to them but they didn’t do any action. I know Ernesto and his neighbors all they want just a street light so that they can be safe. After read this letter, I feel lucky that I live in a safe area and I don’t...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckParagraph/gbrlj/post.htm#506928Tue, 29 Apr 2008 07:08:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:506928babyblue_girl08thank you so much for ur time .checking my grammar in this paragraph..i really appreciate it.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneCheckParagraph/gbrlj/post.htmSun, 27 Apr 2008 22:15:37 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:506235babyblue_girl08can someone check this paragraph for me? i know it had a lot mistake there...plz help me to correct it..well thanks in advance.. There are several ways students can become better learners. Take note and asking handout from teacher. Taking note helps me to learn quickly. I used highlighter to highlight some important stuff, which helps me to remember. I always take note whenever the teacher writes something in the board. Another technique is study in a quiet place, such as library or in your room. I always study in a quiet place, when I have a midterm or exam because it helps me to remember. I don’t want people disturb me while I am studying. In library I can relax more and concentrates on what I’m doing. Participating in class...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ThisNarrativeEssay/zpxnv/post.htm#497005Sun, 06 Apr 2008 04:48:54 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:497005babyblue_girl08thank you so much for ur time checking my essay and thanks for ur concern too. well hope u have a nice day.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseParagraph/zxgkm/post.htmThu, 13 Mar 2008 06:24:51 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:488303babyblue_girl08please check this paragraph for me..may thanks indavance. The several things that annoying me is people keep asking about your life, such as love life,lifestyle,general,ect. I hate people ask those question it so irritate me. They should know people dont like to share their privacy to other people they didn't know. As for me tehy should repect other privacy. Another technique is when i have a bad hair day. That thing is so annoying me.i hated my hair when it dried and oily. Im sure every girl has a bad hair day.It embarrasing and uncomfortable when you have a bad hair day in school or in work. Being lazy is also annoying me. I hate to see people lazy not doing anything and they just sit there for other do for them. The last thing...http://www.englishforums.com/English/HiSomeoneCheckLetter/zxgjx/post.htmThu, 13 Mar 2008 05:27:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:488288babyblue_girl08hi there! this is my first time post here.. i need ur help to check my letter, i know it hundred mistake there. so i hope u guy can help me. thanks indvance. Dear ****, First I would like to thank you for being good friends and always there when the time i need you. Wow! it been two year we didn't see each other. So how you been doing lately? How was your school doing for you? Well i decided to write you this letter to show how I'm feel for you. I'm glad that I'am one of your friends. I know nowadays it kind of hard to friend like you. Wow I can't believe we been friends almost six years. I remember the entire thing we did in the passed years. I hope all the thing we has done before gonna happen to us...