http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=user%3ajulielai&o=DateDescendingSearch results for 'user:julielai'en-USXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfComplaint/ljvmr/post.htm#965283Sun, 08 Nov 2009 17:02:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:965283julielaiHope this helps: http://www.howtocomplain.com/info/cl-template.shtmlhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/Leaflet/ljvmc/post.htm#964754Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:29:27 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:964754julielaiMore names of places and events may be helpful (esp. in "What to do here"). I don't think it reads like something targeted at teenagers.http://www.englishforums.com/English/LetterOfComplaint/ljvmr/post.htm#964752Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:26:32 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:964752julielaiProvide more details about the tour you're complaining about. When was it? Whom did you talk to? etc. etc.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCorrectParagraph/ljdvx/post.htm#964751Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:24:08 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:964751julielaiM y father and mother own a house( period ). It... I, not i It is important to have specific dreams and thought in life (period) etc. etc.http://www.englishforums.com/English/GlobalRecessionIndiasYouth/lwwnm/post.htm#964747Sun, 08 Nov 2009 02:18:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:964747julielaiI've forgotten how debates are conducted. Do you have to anticipate opposing arguments and offer counterargments to them? If so, you might want to cover that.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IAnyoneCheckEssay/lhlmc/post.htm#959381Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:15:52 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959381julielaiYou've gone back and forth between present tense and past tense.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelloPleaseCheckMyEssay/lwbrb/post.htm#959380Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:14:13 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959380julielaiOnce upon a time in a faraway land, where all things are beautiful, all creatures big and small, there lies a young boy born to be one of the successful legends of world class entertainment of all time. (tense)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HiCanUPleaseCheckMyEssay/lwrjx/post.htm#959378Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:11:42 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959378julielaiYou went back and forth between past and present tense.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowRoWriteDataCommentary/lwrch/post.htm#959377Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:08:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959377julielaiTry google "data commentary" and you'll find a few sites on how to tackle this.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneProof/lhjjm/post.htm#959374Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:04:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959374julielaiI think the main problem is sample size, not "accuracy". Your sample size is too small. And I don't know if random sampling is the best method in such a case.http://www.englishforums.com/English/IIeltsLookComposition/lhkcp/post.htm#959370Mon, 02 Nov 2009 00:01:06 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959370julielaiWhat do you mean by "exploit animals for the human purposes"? Meat eaters exploit animals; so do those who buy leather goods.http://www.englishforums.com/English/FromSamsonReviewEssayErrorFree/lhdzn/post.htm#959362Sun, 01 Nov 2009 23:56:40 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:959362julielaiI'm not sure that having studied overseas will help your case. Doesn't the university give preference to those who never have a chance to study abroad?http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanYouHelpWithThisOnePlz/lgzgz/post.htm#951181Sat, 24 Oct 2009 03:13:44 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951181julielaiI think you can develop your ideas a bit more if you do not jump from idea to idea. I usually cover the causes in the first half and the solutions in the second half of the essay, but that's just how I've always handled these essay questions.http://www.englishforums.com/English/ICorrectGrammar/lzprv/post.htm#951175Sat, 24 Oct 2009 03:07:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951175julielaiYou need to be more consistent with your tenses.http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowDoIFixThisParagraph/lzxpb/post.htm#951170Sat, 24 Oct 2009 03:03:06 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:951170julielaiI've highlighted a few things that you might want to correct/rephrase. Although Vincent sold only one painting out of all his works ; (punctuation) even after his death he carried on his artistic ability (rephrase. He's dead. )The Starry Night by Van Gogh was his most famous painting out of all his works. In June 1889 he competed a peace called Hospital of Saint-Remy. This made his work more famous because of the way it caught people’s eye . (fn5) The viewer’s eyes move all over the picture rather than being focused in one spot. Everything about it including it’s color, texture, and lines he used very well in his artwork. The motive behind this was in memory of Gauguin and Bernard, Parisian artists , his friends. (fn4)...http://www.englishforums.com/English/Motherhood/lgrdv/post.htm#948269Tue, 20 Oct 2009 17:02:58 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:948269julielaiDo you have a question about grammar?http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanProofreadGrammarCheckShortEssay-ReallyGrade/lzzlg/post.htm#947160Mon, 19 Oct 2009 15:03:30 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:947160julielaiHighlighted a few things that need correcting. Remembered in appearance by his short mustache, dark hair and demanding tone, Adolf Hitler is most notorious for his contributions to the killing of over 6,000,000 Jews. Hitler began rule over Germany in the year of 1934, a year after establishing his role as leader in the German political party known as the Nazi. Nazis take on Germany was that it would become better if it were racially pure and free of Jewish people. They accused the Jews and blamed them for all kind of problems that Germany faced including WWI. The Nazis began to set in strategies hoping that in time they would run the Jew i s h off. The first attempt to get rid of them was by taking away their rights as...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCorrectEssay/lzrvb/post.htm#947145Mon, 19 Oct 2009 14:51:18 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:947145julielaiHighlighted a few things you might want to rephrase/correct. In contemporary society, some scientists believe that what affect us most are the original personal characteristics rather than the knowledge we have got later. But meanwhile, whether this is true or not has sparked enormous controversy. Those people who agree this statement argue that there is too much originality we have got and can never change . On the other hand, those , who claim that we are always adapting say the lives we get through influence us on all aspects. For my part, I vote for the latter view as it sounds to me to be more reasonable. It is generally accepted that we easily transform our attitude or behaviour when the surroundings push us to be...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldGrammarCheckEssay/lzrbz/post.htm#947141Mon, 19 Oct 2009 14:44:01 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:947141julielaiHighlighted a few things that need fixing. First, you should register for courses on the website like the (homepage name) homepage (xx.com) or (software name) program . Then, you will be randomly selected for each class which exceeds your enrollment ceiling (clarify) . When the final students list will be announced (websites don't announce enrollments) , you may have a second chance to register for the remaining courses. If you want to take some courses that are already full, then you have to fill an off-line registration document up during the Add/Drop period. You need to get a signed permission and signature on the paper from the professor of the course that you want to be enrolled. Next, you ought to visit your academic...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanAnyoneHelpMe/lzdjb/post.htm#947128Mon, 19 Oct 2009 14:38:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:947128julielaiHighlighted a few things you might want to rephrase/correct. The government encourages changing (what do you mean/) the use of industrial buildings. The purpose of this is to promote the six big industries. However, most of the art organizations mainly resorted to the cheap rents of industrial buildings so that they can to survive. They worried about after the activation o f the industrial buildings, they can not be survive d . Some organizations criticize the government does not plan carefully to help them. The help (Do they want help or not?) of the government may even make things worse. Street drama show, Good Show, rents two flat s from industrial buildings in Tai Kwok Tsui. Although there are no lifts and (what)...http://www.englishforums.com/English/ANarrativeStory/lvgww/post.htm#947126Mon, 19 Oct 2009 14:28:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:947126julielaiHighlighted the more glaring issues for you. I could tell that my friend was excited by the looks of her face. Natalie was going in for the talent contest, American Idol, which was a famous worlwide TV competition.She was always lack of confidence as she had no idea she would be _____ (one of ?) the Top 10 contestants . After all, she was talented and skilled in singing. Hoping for perfoming well on stage, she practiced assiduously, so that she could get better and better all the time. As a friend of hers, I showed my encouragement and supported her. It was true to say that a friend inneed is a friend indeed. Once in a while, she got frustrated that she was unable to sing a high tune. She even thought about giving up....http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCheckMyAdviceLetter/lclzq/post.htm#931960Wed, 07 Oct 2009 12:59:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:931960julielaiVery good points. Just some grammatical problems here and there. I've highlighted some of them for you. I'm sorry to hear about your problem. When I was a Form 4 student, I faced the same problem too.Don't be upset about this. everyone at home can hear what you were (tense) saying. I think you can tell your friends to call you at night . Perhaps it's a good idea that your family can't hear what you're saying. you need a talk with your mother. Tell them (mother-them?) you cannot concentrate on If this idea do not work, you can do your homework with your friends at study room . When you working until midnight, it's not good for your health. Third, you cannot get the job...Sun, 04 Oct 2009 21:59:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:928449julielaiUploaded on Sunday, October 04, 2009Sun, 04 Oct 2009 21:53:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:928444julielaiUploaded on Sunday, October 04, 2009http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowCharacterContributeStory/kqxcl/post.htm#926428Sat, 03 Oct 2009 13:44:11 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:926428julielaiJust highlighted a few things for you to fix. Jing-Mei's mother in Two Kinds, the story by Amy Tan, is a very important character who has the power to dominate the story. Jing-Mei is a narrator who tells readers her perspective and thoughts, so the author makes the readers to believe that she is the one who influences the entire story. As a matter of fact, the author wants the readers to realize the mother is a round and dynamic character, and each of her action is very impressive and has a link to the climax of the story. The first impression of the mother is that she is a dedicated mother who only considers to educate her daughter. Chinese government (culture) puts priority in the education, so China has a slogan,...http://www.englishforums.com/English/SerenasTantrumsAtUsOpen/knbbd/post.htmSun, 13 Sep 2009 05:05:25 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:899388julielaiDid anyone watch her match against Kim Clijsters? What a bizarre way to end that match!http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedRevisingPaperSentenceStructure-Grammar/kwpww/post.htm#898544Sat, 12 Sep 2009 15:18:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:898544julielaiHi Benny, If you're dividing the types of probems into sections, I don't think there's a need to color-code. Just visually separate the sections and keep it short and sweet. Just my humble opinion, of course!http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedRevisingPaperSentenceStructure-Grammar/kwpww/post.htm#897947Sat, 12 Sep 2009 05:02:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897947julielaiHighlighted a few things for you to fix. In the middle of game my younger brother came up to me and asks if he can play with us. He was very energetic and excited to play with my friends, but in back of my mind I was thinking that he can get hurt while playing with us because he was not old enough and getting embarrass in front of my friends. Also, I did not want him to get hurt, so I told him to play with kids of his age. When I said him that he gave me an angry looks and run away from me . After he went away from the ground we finished our unfinished game which had to be delay by him . When the game was finished we all went to a shop to get drinks. We were very dehydrated from playing in the sun. As soon as I got back to the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayCorrectionPreparingToefl-Exam/kdxwx/post.htm#897925Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:35:53 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897925julielaiJust a few glaring issues... “Solitude, Spending Time Alone Is One Of Our Best Teachers.” A human being begins his life by his parents’ side. He learns about right and wrong, and then moves on with his life , he starts school, finds friends, has a teacher and learns from the people and things around him. Then he one day takes a step onto the outside world where he finds more people some good and bad, but knows what path to choose. (Get to the point.) What I am trying to say is that I do not agree with the theory that spending time alone is our best teacher. We learn from other people who are in many ways more experienced than us , or from our friends who teach us many of the things we aren’t aware of . Solitude isn’t a good...http://www.englishforums.com/English/StatementOfPurpose/dczww/post.htm#897917Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:30:28 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897917julielaiI think your statement will read better if you tie the various issues together. e.g. You said this is a responsibility to yourself and a commitment to others. Could you elaborate on that? You have mentioned your coursework. Could you explain in detail why you fall in love with HRM? What's your experience in the area? Be sure to bring up no more than one point per paragraph.http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldCheckEssayPartAnswer/kkpkl/post.htm#897911Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:20:46 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897911julielaiHighlighted a few things that need fixing. I support the opinion that (The question asks for your opinion. YOu are not asked to support someone else's opinion) colleges have no such requirement. The reason is that university is the place where the students learn each major deeply (Do you mean "deepen their understanding about a particular area of study?) . For example, the freshmen surely need to learn basic subject for the first time, but world history is not always related to other majors. I think that if students learn in freshmen year, they should learn basic range in their majors . Thus, I believe that college should consider deep study of majors .http://www.englishforums.com/English/EssayWriting/kvqwb/post.htm#897899Sat, 12 Sep 2009 04:12:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897899julielaiHi Benny, Welcome to EF. I've noticed your comments are in various colors. Do the colors mean anything?http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsThisCorrect/3/kmgzc/Post.htm#897541Fri, 11 Sep 2009 22:16:03 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897541julielaiNothing can replace it! (the chocolate, not my head.) So what can replace your head, then? Inquiring minds, you know! Your question reminds me of the Learnean Hydra with his/her many replaceable heads. (I guess Hercules could say, "I'll keep cutting the heads off until nothing can replace them." haha...)http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsThisCorrect/2/kmgzc/Post.htm#897228Fri, 11 Sep 2009 17:17:33 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897228julielaiHow about a bake-off? You'll only get a half-baked solution from me. Since you and I are on the same side, I choose "knit-off" and my job is to hold the yarn. I'll just keep the thread from unravelling...http://www.englishforums.com/English/IsThisCorrect/kmgzc/post.htm#897153Fri, 11 Sep 2009 16:07:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:897153julielaiOuch. My head hurts. :-( I'm not good enough to be an arbiter, but could I add a few scenarios for discussion purposes? Let's say, my father gave me a vase. I love the vase very much, but my cat broke it yesterday. The vase is gone. In this case, will the following be correct? Nothing (that exists) can replace that vase of mine. Nothing (that exists) can replace it now. Now, what if I'm selling a product that I think is the best--say, Model 1.234. In this case, will the following be correct? Nothing else can replace Model 1.234. Nothing else can replace this one. (Buy it!)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectPlotSummary/kkkvx/post.htm#888950Sun, 06 Sep 2009 04:22:19 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:888950julielaiHighlighted a few things that need some work. Necklace is the story about a very poor woman's huge life changes by encountering a necklace. The woman, named Mathilde Loisel who is poor and married a clerk, is described as a pretty woman and trying to have a rich life delusion because of her cheap belongings . One day her husband receives a party invitation card for him ans his wife, but Mathilde does not want to go to the party since she does not have a dress for the party, so her husband gives her the money to buy her dress by giving up his next summer vacation. However, she is still not satisfied because she thinks that only dress looks awful , so she goes to her rich friend, named Mrs. Jeanne Forrestier who is very rich and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectPlotSummary/kkkvx/post.htm#888376Sat, 05 Sep 2009 19:26:47 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:888376julielaiYou went back and forth between present tense and past tense.http://www.englishforums.com/English/CanSomeoneLookShortParagraphThank-You/kjxbr/post.htm#888371Sat, 05 Sep 2009 19:24:24 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:888371julielaithe creation Heaven and Earth or basically things like the sun, moon, and the stars , (punctuation) (You might want to use "First", "Second", and "Third" for each similarity.) they both discuss the creation of man in very similar ways, and both texts have brothers who are torn between good and evil. (New paragraph) First, in both texts they have similar theories on how Heaven and the Earth were created. The only difference is that in the Bible, it states that God created the heaven s and the Earth. I interpret this to mean that God created everything including the stars, the sun, and the moon. ( What about the other text?) Next, both text have similar ways in which man was created, it is so similar...http://www.englishforums.com/English/WouldYouCorrectMyEssay/kkmrh/post.htm#888339Sat, 05 Sep 2009 18:57:56 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:888339julielaimisses the important points (of what?) if he is absent. She thinks it (what is interesting) is interesting. he was given a B. not quantity (of what) . people who don’t ask questions in the classhttp://www.englishforums.com/English/ApologyLetterToTheCeo/khxkq/post.htm#879352Sun, 30 Aug 2009 04:41:16 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:879352julielaiHave you discussed this with your boss?http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldSomeoneCheckMyEssay/kwnmc/post.htm#879200Sat, 29 Aug 2009 21:55:22 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:879200julielaiHighlighted a few things for you to fix. As we all know, cheating is a bad thing in our life , especially in education. This is a big problem for teachers and a headache to have to watch out for . Many students have facts that it is fine to cheat because other students do it. Dishonesty has become a big factor in today society , and this influents everyone in one way or another. Cheating could be occurs everyday , in every school at any level. Cheating occurs even in the nicest schools, including private schools. This usually happen when someone does not prepares very well for the exam or just does not feel like accepted wisdom . Also, one force does it because (article) student knows that he or she can get away with it. It...http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeedEditingParagraphsDoneTomorrow/khnhx/post.htm#878789Sat, 29 Aug 2009 14:37:20 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:878789julielaiA is rather confusing. You might want to stick to simpler sentences. Highlighted a few things for you to fix in B. B: First of all people come in all colours and cultural background. But the author of Pretty Like White Boy Drew Hayden Taylor (it's a book; punctuate accordingly) faced different challenges throughout his life. Because of his appearance, blue eyes white boy he did not look like aboriginal in the brown people village although he was biracial with native and white background. In such case, he felt singled out by the society and his community ; he had to proof his identity, and it was stressful for him to find his dream job in internment industry .http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofReadingEssayThank-You/khxnk/post.htm#878786Sat, 29 Aug 2009 14:30:57 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:878786julielaiFirst of all, my staff and I would like to welcome all of you to Michael Community College. My name is Anna Joseph, I am Assistant School Director. We hope you had a terrific summer and are excited about the start of fall classes. Most importantly, we are pleased that you have chosen to come to Michael Community College. I have a few things to discuss, but today I will talk about only three things : instructors, getting help when needed, and text books. In first place, starting a new school can be scary, but the fact that you have decided to attend college is a great decision. In that matter our instructors are looking forward to assist and helping you to archive your goals. During..., t eachers will spend a lot of time during the...http://www.englishforums.com/English/Essay/khkgr/post.htm#878767Sat, 29 Aug 2009 14:16:26 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:878767julielaiYou have some agreement issues. e.g. We enjoys They dances, jogs, does Some odd word choices as well. You may want to stick to simpler words. I've also highlighted some of the more glaring issues for you to fix. My Hometown My love for my hometown, Tangkak, located in the sourthen part of Johor, is beyond description. Peaple (sp) living in cities envy the fresh air, good interpersonal relationship and peace of countrysides . People living in countrysides envy the good living conditions and the busy of cities. But I don't envy both of them , as my hometown is not highly - developed one nor under-developed one but a medium one. We enjoys most of the benefits of living in the cities and...http://www.englishforums.com/English/CouldCorrectSentences/khjxl/post.htm#872591Mon, 24 Aug 2009 00:25:59 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:872591julielaiJust a few quick corrections: In spite of the recession worldwide, dollars, not dollar the manufacturing sector the service sector Because (incomplete sentence) FDI in China was reduced by 20.3 percent from the same period last year and the decrease in FDI in Vietnam is by 89 percent.http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseHelpMeOut/khglc/post.htm#872590Mon, 24 Aug 2009 00:19:38 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:872590julielaiI don't know that much about cars. Anyway, I highlighted a few things for you to fix. Due to the momentary environmental political (wording) situation and the desire for more efficient vehicles , the Eco -trend continues. Alternative drive systems have not yet been developed yet ; therefore , it is important to use the current technology today as efficiently as possible. First steps which should leed (sp.) to a more energy-efficient manner of driving , were (tense) onboard computers with integrated consumption gauges. These turn out ever more in disrepute to be inaccurate (What are you trying to say?) . The study's goal is to examine existing systems on its accuracy and to recognize possible sources of error. Consumption...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseCorrectEssayWouldGrateful/kglzk/post.htm#872589Mon, 24 Aug 2009 00:08:14 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:872589julielaiHighlighted a few glaring problems for you. Our generation witnesses a technology boom with... (elaborate here). This advent has brought us a lot of advantages in every respects, especially , in education (Do you mean breakthroughs in education? What sort of breakthroughs?) . Therefore, a lot of people believe that with this innovation, the role of teachers will be faded. However, there are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them do not believe (blah blah blah) and a few will be discussed in detail here . Firstly, I strongly believe that the role of teachers will still be very important inspite (check sp.) of the advent of computers because they (who are they?) play a vital role in helping their...http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleaseProofreadThis/kznzc/post.htm#865889Mon, 17 Aug 2009 13:08:09 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:865889julielaiBetter. One thing you want to think about is how you want the roach to be portrayed. Do you want it to be portrayed as a smart bug? Or just another victim? Once you've decided that, then you can reword some of your sentences accordingly. (I'll let someone else proofread this...)http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpWordsWrittenArgument/kzrgz/post.htm#865886Mon, 17 Aug 2009 13:00:49 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:865886julielaiYou shouldn't worry about proofreading at this point. Answer the question first.