http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=user%3anaima&o=DateDescendingSearch results for 'user:naima'en-USXMOD (Build: 3607.32596)http://www.englishforums.com/English/PleasePersonalStatement/hrpcn/post.htmTue, 18 Nov 2008 22:17:35 GMT946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:589029naimahi, i am going to apply for economic major for Undergraduate Application, can you help me to correct my whole essay? I am not good at grammar and i hope to make each paragraph more link and smooth. we are require to show our knowleadge on economics in our essay, also, we are need to tell why the school should choose me and how i am outstanding or having advantage than others with same GPA, but i have not idea where to add these in. Could anyone of you help me out? These are some of the other requirment that i wanna to maintain in the essay: -Is thoughtful and honest , reflective -Strives for depth, not breadth -Follows the conventions of good writing -Conforms to guidelines -Answers the question! -Benefits from...