In recent years, in the trial in law court people who commit an offense have been shown on television to allow everyone to watch them which offers advantages as well as disadvantages. Through this essay, I will draw attention to both pros and cons of such a method, and give my opinion on this.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why depicting criminal trials offers numerous benefits. First of all, it deterrence people who take part in criminal activities. When people who intend to commit murder watch the trial on TV, they abandon the offense or become law-abiding. Which results in contributing to decreasing the crime rate, which
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