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Could you please help me with this?

1 The kid waited for me to turn my back/around to make a mess of the place.
2 The big dog wants to be where the little one is.
3 I rented it to the people I showed it (to)
4 These speakers aren't worth the price they're are selling at. The brand is known for overpricing their products.
5 Do you think I meant to be in your way. I'm sorry I was blocking you on your way out.
6 I call/I tell the way I see it/how I see it. (I'm frank, honest)
7 What's it to you what I do with my time/ What do you care/What does it matter what I do with my time.
8 The show follows a real life timeline where/when if its christmas for us, its Christmas on the show. (How would you say this sentence?)

Thank you
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alc24Could you please help me with this?

1 The kid waited for me to turn my back/around to make a mess of the place.
2 The big dog wants to be where the little one is.
3 I rented it to the people I showed it to. (to is good)

4 These speakers aren't worth the price they're are selling at. The brand This company is known for overpricing their products. (Brand is the visual symbol used by a company. Ok here, but company would be better.)

5 Do you think I meant to be in your way. I'm sorry I was blocking you on your way out.
6 I call/I tell it the way I see it/how I see it. (I'm frank, honest) (either ok)

7 What's it to you what I do with my time/ What do you care/What does it matter what I do with my time. (all good)

8 The show follows a real life timeline where/when if its christmas for us, its Christmas on the show. (How would you say this sentence?)

Thank you

Comments  
Some of the sentences seem to look grammatically correct but they have an odd ring to it.

#1 The kids made a mess of the place when I turned my back/ I wasn't watching.

#8 The show is live.

#5 It's not wrong but just sounded weird! perhaps sarcastic.