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Many studies indicated that there is always a close relationship between human and nature. It is suggested that the natural environment can enhance physical and mental health including restoring attention, reducing stress and developing healthy lifestyle. Additional, people with high level of natural connection can be willing to participate outdour activities and get more health benefits. The natural environment can promote physical and mental health, help people regain attention, reduce stress, and develop healthy exercise habits. Natural connection refers to the degree of closeness between people and nature. Past studies have shown that people's preference for the natural environment is higher than that of the urban environment. Studies have pointed out that people with a high degree of natural connection will be more willing to contact nature with their leisure attitudes acquired in outdoor activities. They will also get better health benefits by engaging in leisure activities in the natural environment. This study intends to explore the relationship between people's natural connectivity, leisure attitudes and leisure environment preferences, and to further understand whether their relationship is affected by transnational issues and residential areas.

This research focuses on Taiwanese, Vietnamese in Taiwan, and Vietnamese in Vietnam (hereafter referred to as Taiwanese, Vietnamese in Taiwan, and Vietnamese) as subjects, and collects data on the research subjects on various websites. Using questionnaire surveys as a research tool, we can deeply understand each object’s views on natural connections and leisure attitudes, as well as their preference for leisure environments when participating in leisure activities, and then further cross-country comparisons to explore Taiwan and Vietnam’s views on natural connections and leisure are there any differences in attitudes and preferences for choosing a leisure environment when participating in leisure activities? The research results show that natural connection and natural use are not affected by nationality; and the current place of residence will affect personal natural use. Research proves that Taiwanese are more willing to use nature than Vietnamese in natural use. This study also found that Taiwanese are better than Vietnamese and Vietnamese in Taiwan in terms of 'cognition', 'emotion' and 'behavior'. To sum up, there are significant differences in leisure attitudes among recipients of different nationalities, and different nationalities and different places of residence also have an impact on all aspects of leisure attitudes. When choosing the leisure environment preference, the current residence has an impact on the urban leisure environment preference, regardless of nationality; on the contrary, nationality has a difference in preference for natural and mixed leisure environments. Taiwanese prefer a leisure environment with beautiful natural environment and a mixed leisure environment with natural elements, while the urban leisure environment is favored by the tested Vietnamese. The results of the research can be helpful in the future for the promotion of natural leisure activities in Vietnam and the reference basis for Taiwan's tourism and leisure activities in planning the 'southward' policy.

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I did not understand a lot of this because of the awkward collocations and unnatural phrases. You need to define the special terms you use, such as "leisure attitude" "leisure environment" and "natural connection." These are not recognized English terms.

You also need to write more clearly, avoid repetition and organize your paragraphs better.


Many studies indicated (use present tense) that there is always a close relationship between people and the natural environment. human and nature. It is suggested that being in nature the natural environment can be restorative for enhance physical and mental health including restoring attention, reducing stress and developing a positive outlook. healthy lifestyle. (That is not physical or mental health.) Additional, (wrong worm. You need the adverb, not the adjective.) people with high level of natural connection (I do not know what you mean.) can be willing to participate outdour activities and get more health benefits. The natural environment can promote physical and mental health, help people regain attention, reduce stress, and develop healthy exercise habits. (repetitive. You just wrote this.) Natural connection refers to the degree of closeness (I don't know what you mean. Do you mean someone who lives in the wilderness versus a city dweller?) between people and nature. Past studies have shown that people's preference for the natural environment is higher than that of the urban environment. (Hmm. I don't believe that. People with a free choice of where to live more often choose a penthouse in London over a treehouse in the country.) Studies have pointed out that people with a high degree of natural connection will be more willing to contact nature (That is not a natural phrase.) with their leisure attitudes acquired in outdoor activities. (I don't know what you mean. ) They will also get better health benefits (This is repeating the same idea again. Your writing would be much better if you organized it and avoided repetition) by engaging in leisure activities in the natural environment. This study intends to explore the relationship between people's natural connectivity, leisure attitudes what leisure activities they engage in, and where they prefer spend their leisure time and leisure environment preferences, and to further understand whether their relationship is affected by transnational issues (their nationality? ) and where they live. residential areas.

This research focuses on participants in this study were Taiwanese, Vietnamese nationals living in Taiwan, and Vietnamese in Vietnam (hereafter referred to as Taiwanese, Vietnamese in Taiwan, and Vietnamese) as subjects, (repetitive). and collects data on the research subjects on various selected websites. (Don't you mean that you used social media websites to identify your subjects and collect survey responses from them? How many subjects participated? How many of each group? ) Using questionnaires surveys as a research tool, we can deeply understand each subject's object’s views on natural connections and leisure attitudes, as well as their preference for leisure environments when participating in leisure activities, (This is repetitious. You wrote this earlier. Describe your survey questions instead.) and then further cross-country comparisons (I don't understand this. You need to write more clearly.) to explore Taiwanese and Vietnamese views on natural connections and leisure are there any differences in attitudes and preferences for choosing a leisure environment when participating in leisure activities? (run-on sentence) The research results show that natural connection and natural use are not affected by nationality; and the current place of residence will affect personal natural use. Research proves that Taiwanese are more willing to use nature (Do you mean natural products over plastics?) than Vietnamese in natural use. This study also found that Taiwanese are better than Vietnamese and Vietnamese in Taiwan in terms of 'cognition', 'emotion' and 'behavior'. ( Do you mean that Taiwanese are smarter, have better emotions and are better behaved? How would you assess this?) You really need to organize your paragraphs better) To sum up, there are significant differences in leisure attitudes among recipients of different nationalities, (Poor English. We do not receive nationalities like receiving an email.) and different nationalities and different places of residence also have an impact on all aspects of leisure attitudes. When choosing the leisure environment preference, (I don't understand to choose a preference. Do you mean select something on a questionnaire?) the current residence has an impact on the urban leisure environment preference, regardless of nationality; on the contrary, nationality has a difference in preference (That makes no sense. Nationality is the identification a person has with a birthplace. It does not have preferences.) for natural and mixed leisure environments. Taiwanese prefer to spend their leisure time in a natural setting such as a park or hiking trail, a leisure environment with beautiful natural environment and a mixed leisure environment with natural elements, while the urban leisure environment is favored by the tested Vietnamese. The results of the research can be helpful in the future for the promotion of natural leisure activities in Vietnam and the reference basis (??) for Taiwan's tourism and leisure activities in planning the 'southward' policy. (What is the southward policy? The only thing google finds is "Southbound Policy")

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