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I am trying to write a comment about a friend of mine. I want to say that she is a good person (always with good intencions and so). I wrote:

Julie's heart is so big that it does not fit inside her chest.

I am not sure if my statment is well written or not. Could somebody help me please?. Thanks in beforehand.

Harold.
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It is grammatically correct. Metaphor is about imagery, though, so you can go wild with the ending if you wish.
I would use a different ending. I would not be comfortable mentioning a woman's chest while trying to compliment her. (It's grammatically correct, though.)
CJ
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Hello all

So, thanks for your replys. It seems that I did a mistake with the word "chest". Really I am not sure the right word for "pecho" in spanish (my mother tongue). The "chest" that I want to refer is not the "breat".

I want to say that that girl have a good heart, she always helps the people, always with good intentions. The intention is to right a metaphore about her good heart. And it is not exclusive for women. The statment could be:

The Pope's heart is so big that it does not fit inside his "xyz"

xyz.... I do not know the right word. If somebody can help, I will apreciate it.

Thanks.

Harold.
There's "lungs", but, well, ... Emotion: smile
Or ribs! Emotion: big smile

Is body too big to be the container of the heart?
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Your statement looks pretty much OK to me. And I don't think there's nothing wrong on mentioning a woman's chest, if it's a close and personal friend.
"She's all heart" is a common phrase (though some readers might find it sentimental).

MrP