(This is a true story happened in my childhood and had changed my way of thinking. Please read it may be it helps you in any way and tell me if you find any mistake. And you surely will.)
Once, when I was 11 years old, I was trying to catch a butterfly in a garden. I made many attempts to catch it but couldn’t succeed. Meanwhile a man came and asked me “why are you trying catch this butterfly?” I said innocently “I like it.” Hearing this he held my wrists so hard that hurt me. “You are hurting me” I said with tears floating in my eyes. “So you feel pain” he said with a mischievous smile and pressed my wrist more tightly. “Why are you doing this to me? It’s hurting.” I said and started crying. “I want you to feel the pain you are trying to impose on the butterfly.” He said and then released my wrists. “Look kid! If you caught the butterfly, you would hurt it as I did hurt you. So don’t do this and let it go.” He advised me and then patted on my cheek, kissed on my head and went away. So I chased the butterfly no more.
Since then whenever I intend to do something bad (Allah forbids) or I refuse to help a needy person I bethink “what, if it happens to me?” Then I abandon all my bad intentions and do the right thing.
By Rabia (TG)
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sundarnaz(This is a true story. It happened in my childhood and had changed my way of thinking. Please read it maybe it will helps you. in any way and Tell me if you find any mistakes. And you surely will.)
Once, when I was 11 years old, I was trying to catch a butterfly in a garden. I made many attempts to catch it but couldn’t succeed. Meanwhile a man came and asked me,Why are you trying catch this butterfly?” I said innocently,“I like it.” Hearing this, he held my wrists so hard that it hurt me. “You are hurting me,” I said with tears floating in my eyes. “So you feel pain,” he said with a mischievous smile and pressed my wrists more tightly. “Why are you doing this to me? It’s hurting.,” I said and started crying. “I want you to feel the pain you are trying to impose on the butterfly,” he said and then released my wrists. “Look kid! If you caught the butterfly, you would hurt it as I did hurt
Past tense of 'hurt' is same as present tense.
you. So don’t do this and let it go.” He advised me and then patted on my cheek, kissed on my head and went away. So I chased the butterfly no more. Since then, whenever I intend to do something bad (Allah forbids) or I refuse to help a needy person, I bethink “What, if it happensed to me?” Then I abandon all my bad intentions and do the right thing.By Rabia (TG)
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Thanks sir for your kind help. I noted all the mistakes and will try to avoid repeating them. Soon you will read another true story extracted from my life. But I'm a bit confused here. Can we use the phrase "may be" with future tense?
Yes, you can say, 'It may be that this will help.' Usually we shorten it to: 'Maybe this will help.'
It's another way to say, 'Possibly this will help.'

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Great lesson; good story. Hope to have such nice stuff in future as well. Good Luck.

Looks like it’s really true story! Thanks for sharing it with us.

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