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I am not sure if I have chosen the correct section for this but... i havent other..

I wrote a motivation letter and I think it has some grammar mistakes which i cannot see due to my very average knowledge of English. So i am asking you for help if you could check it and tell me where ar emy mistakes and so on.

I am writing to you concerning an educational program which is offered by Embassy of Japan in Latvia and Japanese Ministry of Internal affairs. I have learned about this program from Latvian mass media and heard that it provides an opportunity for young people from Latvia to attend an educational trip to Japan.

I am a first year student of European Business Studies in Riga International School of Economics and Business Administration. The whole studies are held in English. Besides English I have fluent knowledge of German, Russian and Latvian, I have also studied French for one year and I am looking forward to study new languages and get in touch with other cultures. I have great interest for Eastern cultures and especially for Japan. My future qualification requires different aspects of professional knowledge such as Marketing, Presentations, Business Communications, Computer Skills, Foreign languages etc. I am really glad to study such important modern sciences.

Japan is a country with unique ancient culture and at the same time is a world leader of modern Hi-tech technology. Japan country achieved such high results due to the talent and hard work of its nation, efficiency of business management at all levels. I have a great desire to find out more about modern Japan, closer to contact and communicate with my Japanese counterparts, therefore this trip is very important for me. I am sure that this trip will even more stimulate my interest towards Japanese language, culture and current life.



I hope that you will take my candidature into consideration.

Does it sound okay? What should be reworked?

Many thanks for your help!
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AnonymousI am not sure if I have chosen the correct section for this but... i havent other..

I wrote a motivation letter and I think it has some grammar mistakes which i cannot see due to my very average knowledge of English. So i am asking you for help if you could check it and tell me where ar emy mistakes and so on.



I am writing to you concerning an educational program which is offered by the Embassy of Japan in Latvia and the Japanese Ministry of Internal affairs. I have learned about this program from the Latvian mass media and heard that it provides an opportunity for young people from Latvia to attend an educational trip to Japan.



I am a first-year student of European Business Studies at the Riga International School of Economics and Business Administration. The whole studies are held entirely in English. Besides English, I have a fluent knowledge of German, Russian and Latvian. I have and also studied French for one year. and I am looking forward to study new languages and get in touch with other cultures. I have great interest for in Eastern cultures, and especially for Japan. My future qualification (this does not make much sense - do you mean qualification for this program, or qualifications for future employment, or my intended career requires me to have professional knowledge... ) requires different aspects of professional knowledge such as Marketing, Presentations, Business Communications, Computer Skills, Foreign languages (these terms are not capitalized) etc. I am really glad to study such important modern sciences.(I enjoy studying these subjects.)



Japan is a country with unique ancient culture and at the same time is a world leader of modern Hi-tech technology. Japan country achieved such high results (market leadership?) due to the talent and hard work of its citizens nation, and efficiency of business management at all levels. I have a great desire to find out more about modern Japan, and closer to contact meet and communicate with my Japanese counterparts. Therefore this trip is very important for me. I am sure that this trip will even more stimulate my interest towards in the Japanese language, culture and current life.



I hope that you will take my candidature into consideration.

Does it sound okay? What should be reworked?It sounds fine. I've remarked on some of the text where you can make improvements.

Many thanks for your help!

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