I heard that you had came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in Calgry Canada.How was it done.You had written in your previous letter that you were seacjomg a job . As for as my concern that you had gone there as a immigrant and you got the immigrant visa . It was your prime goal to live and work there and educate your kids. How did you change your mood so quickly.

I heard that Calgry is the most beautiful city and worth seeing. There are so many job opportunities for immigrant. It is not a easy task that somebody easity adjust or accumudated to new country .I hope you would get a job in a software house but you did show patient. I know you are so talented genious person and have a vast experience in computer industry.

Why dont you asked my opion on that seriou issue. I would recommend you to stay there and not come back. Dont worry you have a immgrant visa you have to go there any time. Please do change your mind go there again with new enthusiam. I am sure you will succeed.

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I heard that you came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in . How was it done? You had written in your previous letter that you were searching a job. I seemed that you went there as an immigrant and you got the immigrant visa. It was your prime goal to live and work there and educate your kids. How did you change your mood so quickly?

I heard that is the most beautiful city and worth seeing. There are so many job opportunities for immigrant. It is not a easy task that somebody easily adjusts or accumulates to new country .I hope you would get a job in a software house but you did show patient. I know you are such a talented genius person and have a vast experience in computer industry.

Why didn’t take my opinion on that serious issue. I would recommend you to not come and stay there. Don’t worries you have an immigrant visa you have to go there any time. Please do change your mind go there again with new enthusiasm. I am sure you will succeed.

Please correct where necessary.

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I heard that you came back to your home country-Bulgaria after spending three months in Calgary Canada. How was it done? [No meaning!] You had written in your previous letter that you were searching a job. I seemed that you went there as an immigrant and you got the immigrant visa. It was your prime goal to live and work there and educate your kids. How did you change your mood so quickly?

I heard that Calgary is the most beautiful city and worth seeing. There are so many job opportunities for immigrant. It is not a easy task that somebody to easily adjusts or accumulates to new country. I hope you would get a job in a software house but you did show patient. I know you are such a talented genius person and have a vast experience in computer industry.

Why didn’t take my opinion on that serious issue. I would recommend you to not come and stay there. Don’t worries you have an immigrant visa you have to go there any time. Please do change your mind go there again with new enthusiasm. I am sure you will succeed.