I need your help. I have to inform my cousins that my grandfather died. Could someone please check my letter.
I am sorry to tell you that my father Ivan passed away last month (10th) at the age of 90. We all have a hard time and my mother especially. He was of great help to all of us. His love to us give him a strength to come to this age (to live so long). We pray God to reword him for all the good he done in this world.
Kind Regards (With Love),
Your cousin Lukas with (and) family
Ps I would like to hear how are you and is there any new member in the family.
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I am sorry to tell you that my father Ivan passed away last month (the 10th) at the age of 90. His love for us gave him the strength to reach this age. We have all been having a hard time and my mother especially. He was of great help to all of us. We pray God to reward him for all the good he did in this world.
Your cousin Lukas and family
PS: I would like to hear how you all are and whehter there is any new member of the family.
Anonymous:It doesn't matter the most imprtant thing that the structure is correct
but i dont know the layout it depends upon if you are using american or british style. In our school we are using british style and we first start by greating the person and asking him about his or her parents in the first paragraph. In the second we write the body of the letter. In the third we are using sentences like(waiting for reply ,counting the hours to meet you). The last line we write yours lovingly and name of the sender
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