I'm suffering from a bit of unrequited love so in my desolation I've jotted something down...
Tell me if it works.

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Love is not a mirror,
and by love
my meaning is not desire

Allthough love comes through

Dances upon that fire

Yes, Love is in the differences
as god would not be alone
There's a bit of filler here
To save that sweetly tone

And if you diss this cryptic cat
As meaning scatters on the surface
Of the flooded rabbit hole

Know love is not a mirror
Even though I see me in your soul
It works!
I'd only change the line "There's a bit of filler here" somehow...
Anonymous
I'm suffering from a bit of unrequited love so in my desolation I've jotted something down...
Tell me if it works.

-------------------------------
Love is not a mirror,
and by love
my meaning is not desire

Allthough love comes through

Dances upon that fire

Yes, Love is in the differences
as god would not be alone
There's a bit of filler here
To save that sweetly tone

And if you diss this cryptic cat
As meaning scatters on the surface
Of the flooded rabbit hole

Know love is not a mirror
Even though I see me in your soul

nice... thank you for sharing this with us .. Emotion: smile
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
thanks! It's good to be appreciated Emotion: big smile