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Please help me to correct, thanks.

Peter is a obedient, clever boy. He likes to wake up early and go to school with his friends. Every day, he will not miss any lessons in school. He likes studying / He likes his school life.

Peter often pay attention to every teacher while they are teaching in class. She will ask questions when he meets problems (with his homeworks). He would not hesitate to help his friends in need. All teachers and his friends like him very much.

When he comes back home, after bathing, he will do his homework before having a short snap. He always follows his study timetable for his preparation. He starts doing revision early (for his exam) at least 2 hours every day.

He is indeed a well-organised boy.
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Hi Vincent.

"A Peter's life"? How many lives does Peter have? Emotion: wink

Did you possibly mean "A day in Peter's life"?
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Peter is an obedient, clever boy. He likes to wake up early and go to school to (unless he walks to school with his friends) his friends. He never misses a lesson, he likes to study.

Peter always pays attention to his teachers while attending class. He asks questions when he has trouble with his homework. He would not hesitate to help his friends in need. All teachers and friends like him a lot.

When he comes back, takes a bath and does his homework before taking a short nap (sleep, right?). He always follows his study timetable for his preparation.(I can't understand what you want to say in this sentence, it doesn't make sense). He reviews his lesson/his books before exams at least 2 hours every day.

This is how I would write some of these sentences, I hope this helps.
yup, please help me, thanks!
The title should be "Peter's life"
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