Please read through the paragraph and make correction where you find mistakes. Please help me make the appeal stronger. Thanks.

I am surprised how can a man so praised for his being so humble in all most every reality show he attends as a guest says such disgusting thing about a profession so respectful. He looks so sarcastic with the laugh at the end of his sentence. Teaching is a prophetic profession; only blessed people join it. He should apologise publicly for degrading the profession and hurting all most everyone related to the profession.

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