Bedeviled by your stare,
Among the whirling stars
Abandoned to despair,
I dare to steal a glance
At your so tender hands…
There won’t be any chance.
This pain my heart withstands,
And I become alive,
From broad, wide expanse
Of love I strength derive…

Dear poets, this is my third attempt of writing poetry in English - criticism is welcomed
hey nice poem and i liked its end the most and i wish the my requited love will get over soon Emotion: sad
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A beautiful poem. I loved it..
I think your poem flows beautifully.....and I can relate

Valerie,

San Diego,CA
I feel that the words are carefully chosen..

I like your poem
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That is a nice poem Fair Lady. Keep going..
so how's it gotten over?...