Hello all,

please check this story.

Long ago in a faraway land, there was a kingdom whose ruler was sad. The king of the land thought his people were lazy. The king pondered about this problem when suddenly an idea flashed in his mind. He placed a heavy stone in the centre of a busy road at midnight. When the Sun rose the next day and people started to walk on the road, they saw the stone and tried to move away from it. Businessmen, soldiers, farmers all escaped from the stone. Then a young man came and saw the stone. He decided to move the stone. He tried hard and finally moved it aside.
He found an iron box there on which was written:
“This box contains 1000 gold coins. These coins are for the brave man who would move the stone”
AvidlearnerThen a young man came and saw the stone. He decided to move the stone. He tried hard and finally moved it aside.
Hi
Very nice and very short story. You should try add more text to it. Add two three paragraphs like one about king and how lazy people were. And provide more insight about Young man. Overall its a good story if u you can make it a bit longer

Best of luck
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A very very good story I was very happy about it