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Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscus, sunflowers, water lilies and some more. One windy afternoon, Lynda followed her family to visit a plant nursery near Ampang.

While reaching the nursery, Lynda saw a wide variety of attractive plants there. They walked around and chose a few bonsai they like. They also found some unique and special plants there. The flowers are beautiful and attractive.

After buying the bonsai, her father went to an accessories nursury shop. He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them. Her father decided to plant them in his backyard. Her mother would also give some bonsai for their neighbours.
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Hi,

for the questions that I want to ask:

(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.

The store had everything they needed.

(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.

What can I write after that? how to make a good ending?

They enjoyed shopping there. Afterwards, they went home and worked in their garden.

Clive
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Hi ,

Vincent, I am really happy to se that you are starting to write essays. This will be very good for your English.

Please ask if there are any corrections that you don't understand.

Clive

Lynda's family like gardening. There are a lot of different kinds of plants in their garden like orchids, hibiscuses, sunflowers and water lilies and some more. One windy afternoon, Lynda went with followed her family to visit a plant nursery near Ampang.



When they reached the nursery, Lynda saw a wide variety of attractive plants there. They walked around and chose a few bonsai they liked. They also found some unique and special plants there. The flowers were are beautiful and attractive.



After buying the bonsai, her father went to an accessories nursery shop. Where I live, plants and accesories are sold in the same shop

He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available <<< what do you mean by 'available'? and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them. Her father decided to plant them in his backyard. Her mother was also going to give (or you could just say 'gave') would also give some bonsai to for their neighbours.
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Thanks, for the questions that I want to ask:

(a) All the things in the shop were available = Anything they want to buy, they can easily get there.

(b) He bought two packets of soil, some fertilizer and four pots. All the things in the shop were available and cheap. It was really a good nursery for them.

What can I write after that? how to make a good ending?
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AFTER buying the bonsai ,her after
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