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Dear Friend

This is my writting in below..
I need you to correct my English wrong.
I deem it will be improve my English power..
when you free..read it about my writing. thanks again.

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lately.I had make a big decision. that is I quit my job.
and do something I like. For my part..this is need a big courage.
I didn’t know It will be success or failure.
But when people have(got) some age.I feel I should to do something as long as I like.
hereafter..It seem to didn’t have chace to do that. I still trust some words.
If you do.you will get a chance...but I doubt.Why I didn’t use that on girl for making friend..

Return to the subject.For my part,at this quit on job is a invest..I thought that is a big invest.
I will make materiality of the mony input turn to immateriality of the knowlage input.
I trust the knowledge input can make me better in the future.
So.since this time i will be trying to change myself.
lifestyle or learning presence..transform myself into a "Super Saiya“.
indeed..I take a lot of people’s blessing to leave.

At here.Thanks so much guys.
and the friends helping to me..thanks.
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Hello Dodoro

My try is like below. But I'm quite certain whether this is good English or not. I hope someone will correct it.

Lately I have made a big decision. That is, I will quit my present job to do what I like to do. For me, this decision needed a big courage. I don’t know whether it will end in success or failure. I believe one should do what they like to do when they have attained a certain age. If I lose the chance now, I wouldn’t have any chance hereafter. I would like to believe the proverb that if we do our best we will get a chance, but sometimes I doubt whether it is true. If it were true, I could have a prettier girlfriend and better friends.
Returning to the subject, for me, the job quitting is like an investment for future. Yes, I believe it is indeed a big investment. Right now I would like to get a good education rather than money. I believe the education will help me to live a better life in future. So, since now on, I will try to change my lifestyle and myself. I hope I could change myself into a "Super Saiya" through learning. If they know my intention, I believe, many of my people will bless me to hear I leave the job.


By the way what is "Super Saiya"?
paco
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Hi..thanks for your reply..But..I feel My English not good enough.
because..I am already quit my job and write this note..Emotion: stick out tongue
first of all..
when you correct my words..It seem I am not quit my job,I Just thinking..
"I will quit my present job to do what I like to do.",But It's already be done,I mean I quit.Emotion: stick out tongue
second..
I wish to explain..just if someone to do something.will take a chance..
just do something..not do someone's best..
and..I try to speak a joke..maybe not a joke..Emotion: stick out tongue
such as write a love letter for a girl..
If I do that..maybe I can take a chance become a boyfriend for her...you know..Emotion: stick out tongue
or maybe I try to speak to some girl I love her.so..I will take a chance she Accept or reject..

lastly..the "Super Saiya" is comic from Japan.
I have no idea how to explan that..do you know about "Dragonball Z Sagas".
haha..anyway..Thanks again for your kind to reply me...
but I just wish someone could check my grammar not to translate to another sentence..
I know it could be many wrong my writing..but i am not a native speaker in English..^^
I mean I need to know..which english wrong I used.^^

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