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Can you give me some comments?

  1. Christ, is my best friend. She has a very cute face and a nice smile.

  2. She was born in a very healthy family. She has a father, mother, sister and brother. She is a very clever and filial piety girl.

  3. She is an honest and responsible monitor. In the school, her results is superior, also is a diligent pupil. She always helps some pupils are difference. If I have some homework don’t understand, I will ask her.

  4. Christ and I have six year relationship, I hope we can be friend forever.



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>She is a very clever and filial piety girl.(?)

>Christ and I have six year relationship

Careful: this has usually sexual connotatations these days.
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Christ is not a girl's name. In fact, I've never heard of a boy called Christ either. Did you really mean Christ? (as in Jesus) or were you thinking of the girls' name Christine?
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1.Christ is my best friend. She has a very cute face/she is very cute with a nice smile.
2.She was born in a very healthy family( what do you exactly mean?). She has a father, a mother, sister and brother. She is a very clever and filial piety girl.(?)

She is an honest and responsible monitor. Her results at school( school results) are superior, she is a diligent pupil as well. She always helps some pupils (in)(I don't understand what are you trying to say)
I ask her for help if I have some difficulties with the homework.
4.Christ and I are on friendly terms for six years/ I hope we'll be friends forever.

That are only my suggestions.
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Have you started doing more reading yet, VT?

I have never heard of anybody named Christ except for Jesus Christ.
I also doubt that anyone has ever tried to refer to any girl as a "filial piety girl".
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  1. Chris is my best friend. She has a very cute face and a nice smile.

  2. She was born into a very wealthy (?) family. She has a father, mother, sister and brother. She is a very clever intelligent girl and a dutiful daughter filial piety girl. (???).

  3. She is an honest and responsible monitor. In the school, her results is grades/marks are superior. also She is also a diligent pupil student. She always helps some pupils are difference other students when they have questions. If I have some homework I don’t understand, I will can ask her for help.

  4. Chris and I have six year relationship known each other for 6 years. I hope we can be friends forever.