Is "an increasing number of things have been becoming wrong notably, huge problems are taking place" grammatically correct?? Does it looks like academic writing?

No, it is incorrect grammar.

Good academic writing should have clarity.

Say eg More and more things have been going wrong. There are huge problems.

Don't forget the basics, such as starting every sentence with a capital letter and ending it with suitable punctuation.



"Huge" is not a very academic vocabulary word.

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