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Smoking is a bad habit widespread among teenagers.It contains dangerous items which destroy the human brain and lungs. It causes different diseases such as cancer in different areas in the human body.
From the religious point of view,it's prohibited . There are different clear versuses in the Holy Qura'n as God says;"Don't throw yourself in the destroy."
The reason of the teenagers' smoking is based on psychologica factors.Through smoking they think they show people that they are adult and can do whatever they want.
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please check its structure
I assume you are trying to write this as an essay. For a simple essay structure, you need paragraphs as follows.
POINT . . .
You are missing an introduction and a conclusion. Your three points are also very brief. Can you think of any other points to make?
Best wishes, Clive
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Anonymous:There is not as many advantages as there is disadvantages. But people that are publishing things about smoking only show people the bad affects that can be some good side effects which people that smoke like which is relaxation because of the drug in the cigarette Nicotine it makes the brain think that its relaxing and give relief to the person smoking. But there is a lot of bad side effects which can harm our bodies
I think theres a lot worse things in the world than smokin'... i mean theres genecide going on and all you people can go on about is people smoking
Smoking isn't that bad if you only have three a day or less. Anyway i found out it decreases your changes of getting amnesia
Anonymous:Perhaps someday you will stop to smoke and realize the importance of life...while you are still living!!![K]
mrs. l. johnson
Anonymous:i think you have rong obinion.i am sorry to say that
People are waiting to help.
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