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Studying abroad is one of the most beneficial experiences. By studying abroad, students have the opportunity to study and try many new things. Study abroad had many benefits.

Firstly, when you study in foreign countries, there are a lot of opportunities to travel in the city, out of city or travel to other countries. You will experience a brand-new country with incredible new outlooks, customs, and activities.

Another advantage of study abroad is you move to new places while traveling, which is also beneficial for students to increase the cultural knowledge. You will find incredible new foods, customs, traditions, and social atmospheres. You have a better understanding and appreciation of the nation’s people history and lifestyles.

In addition, you have a chance to improve our language. It is better than to learn a language with the native speakers. Because we can practice with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve your skills.

Most of all, these kinds of students have greater chances getting a good career than average students that study locally. You must try our best to overcome what happened to make our dream come true.

Last but not least, study abroad will help to develop personal skills. It is an opportunity to solve new problems. You will be self-reliance. Especially, you must make new relationship among people. You can develop a better communication.

In conclusion, study abroad has many benefits. It offers great opportunities for better present and future. If you have a chance I think you should take that chance to study abroad.



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Studying abroad is one of the most beneficial experiences. (incomplete sentence. You need to add a that-clause.) By studying abroad, students have the opportunity to study and try many new things. Study abroad had many benefits. (In the past, but not now? You repeat yourself. You already stated this in the first sentence.)

First, when you study in foreign countries, there are a lot of opportunities to travel in the city, (which city?) out of (missing word) city or travel to other countries. You will experience a brand-new country with incredible new outlooks, customs, and activities.

Another advantage of study abroad is (missing word) you move to new places while traveling, which is also beneficial for students to increase the (wrong word) cultural knowledge. You will find incredible new foods, customs, traditions, and social atmospheres. You have a better understanding and appreciation of the nation’s people (missing punctuation) history and lifestyles. (This paragraph seems to have the same idea as the last one.)

In addition, you have a chance to improve our (wrong word) language. It is better than to learn a language with the native speakers. Because we (shift of person, from second - you - to first. Be consistent.) can practice with the local people what we study at school, so it is very useful to improve your skills.

Most of all, these kinds of students (What kinds?) have greater chances getting (wrong form) a good career than average students that study locally. You must try our best to overcome what happened to make our dream come true. (I really don't understand this. What happened? Why was it an impediment?)

Last but not least, study abroad will help to develop personal skills. It is an opportunity to solve new problems. You will be self-reliance. (wrong form) Especially, you must make new relationship (wrong form) among people. You can develop a better communication skills.

In conclusion, study abroad has many benefits. It offers great opportunities for (missing word) better present and future. If you have a chance (missing punctuation) I think you should take that chance to study abroad.

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Thank you very much. I will try to improve my skill