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Nowadays, advertisements has gained popularity that can be seen anywhere, on streets or in the media. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
There are several convincing reasons why advertisements have became popular on a daily basis. First, since it can provide the diversity of occupation for many people, society may reduce the unemployment rate. In fact, advertising companies have a great deal of position, such as artists, painters or copywriters in designing and preparing logos, contents or ideas, which can give the unemployment these jobs, even assist their lives. Second, by making manifold kinds of advertisements, many people, especially kids or adolescents would be attracted with funny pictures or thought-provoking videos. This means that advertisements are often humorous and absorbing, which made public laugh and entertaining.
On the other hand, advertising could cause disadvantages for customers. People are always persuaded to follow the latest trend and buy unnecessary things. A good example could be the smart phone. Every year, people can be seen queuing to buy the latest models, even when those are having a perfectly great phone that does not need changing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads them to make this choice. In addition, since advertisements exert a great impact on children, it may more harm than good to development of kids. Obviously, some advertisements have loaded with inappropriate contents, which can cause serious mental and behavioral issues for youngsters
In conclusion, all the opinions mentioned above make sense and consequently, it is hard to come to an absolute conclusion. In my opinion, advertisements in daily basis will make their life more interesting

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Nowadays, advertisements has (wrong verb form. It does not match the subject.) gained popularity that can be seen (Where do we see popularity? ) anywhere, on streets or in the media. . This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.


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Although there are many benefits of advertising, it can lead to impulse buying and some content may be inappropriate for young children.



There are several convincing reasons why advertisements have became popular on a daily basis. First, since it can provide the diversity of occupations for many people, society (wrong word. ) having a large advertising industry may reduce the unemployment rate. In fact, advertising companies have a variety of jobs great deal of position, such as artists, painters or copywriters who are involved in in designing and preparing logos, contents or ideas, which can give the unemployment these jobs, (Wrong usages. unemployment do not take jobs. People take jobs.) even assist their lives. Second, by making manifold (wrong word) different kinds of advertisements, many people, especially kids or adolescents would be attracted by the with funny pictures or thought-provoking videos. This means that advertisements are often humorous and interesting; they entertain and make us laugh. absorbing, which made public laugh and entertaining.
On the other hand, advertising could cause problems / difficulties disadvantages for customers. People are always persuaded to follow the latest trend and buy unnecessary things. A good example is could be the smart phone. Every year, people can be seen queuing to buy the latest models, even when they have those are having a perfectly great phone that does not need to be replaced. changing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads them to make this choice. In addition, since advertisements exert a great impact on children, it may do more harm than good to their development of kids. Obviously, some advertisements have loaded with inappropriate content, contents, which can cause serious mental and behavioral issues for youngsters (missing punctuation.)
In conclusion, all the opinions mentioned above make sense and consequently, it is hard to come to an absolute judgement / verdict / final decision conclusion. In my opinion, viewing advertisements on a in daily basis will make their life more interesting