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Hello teachers!

I wrote three letters as a homework.

I need your advice.

Any comments are welcome!!!

If there’s better expression, just let me know!

Thanks in advance!

Dear Mr.Eliott

I am a sub-manager of K.H bank.

I am writing this e-mail concerning interest rates for the deposits.

(Are there other expressions saying ‘I am writing this e-mail….’)

Due to the change in government regulations, we are able to increase the interest rates to 12%.

I hope this information would help you.

Yours truly

Ellisa

Dear Ms Tomomi

I am a sub-manager of K.H. bank.

I am writing in connection with interest rates for loans.

Unfortunately, we have been forced to increase the interest rates from 8 to 14%. This is owing to a change in government regulations which is beyond our control.

I hope this information is helpful for you.

Yours sincerely

Ellisa

Dear Sir or Madam

I am a manager of sales department at Pink company.

I am happy to tell you that we relocated our office from to .

Feel free to visit our new office and see our newly released products.

Best regards

Ellisa

Manager of sales department, Pink
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Try it again, Ellisa!
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Ellisa, did you have a question?
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