Many people tend to watch news on the internet through mobile phones or laptops while the others still remain habit of reading on newspapers. They also believe that newspapers will keep the most significant source of news. I totally disagree with this viewpoint.

Nowadays, the speed and convenience of the Internet in this digital age have led to the increasing popularity of online news. Firstly, it is very easy for everyone to read all news across the globe. People just connect almost instantly to the Internet, and then they can surf the websites and choose the news of their choice to read. Secondly, online news updates quickly hot news in 24 hours a day every day. There are a lot of problems, events,… happening in a day, so every time people access to the Internet can follow those news. The more widespread the accessibility of the Internet, the more people will come to rely on it as their news source.

In contrast, newspapers have drawbacks which affect their popularity. One major disincentive of relying on newspapers as a news source is the cost. Comparing to freely available news online, newspapers publishers are facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Some major American newspapers have now introduced online version alongside their printed editions in an attempt to arrest this trend. Another disadvantage of newspapers is updating news is exactly slower than its in internet. For example, newspapers provide us with the news occurring previous days as well as there are not enough hot news in a day in one newspapers because of being edited and published.

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Although more and more people read new on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. do you agree or disagree?


Many people tend to watch (?? The topic was about reading, not watching.) news on the internet through mobile phones or laptops while the others still remain habit of reading on newspapers. They also believe that newspapers will keep the most significant source of news. I totally disagree with this viewpoint.

Nowadays, the speed and convenience of the Internet in this digital age (Repetitious) have led to the increasing popularity of online news. First, it is very easy for everyone to read all (missing word) news across the globe. People just connect almost instantly to the Internet, and then they can surf the websites and choose the news of their choice to read (Repetitious) . Second, online news updates quickly hot news in 24 hours a day every day. There are a lot of problems, events,… happening in a day, so every time people access to the Internet (missing word) can follow those news. The more widespread the accessibility of the Internet (missing word), the more people will come to rely on it as their news source.

In contrast, newspapers have drawbacks which affect their popularity. One major disincentive of relying on newspapers as a news source is the cost. Comparing to freely available news online, newspapers publishers are facing the reality of falling circulation figures. Some major American newspapers have now introduced (missing word) online version alongside their printed editions in an attempt to arrest this trend. Another disadvantage of newspapers is (missing word) updating news is exactly slower than its in internet. For example, newspapers provide us with the news occurring (missing word) previous days as well as there are not enough hot news in a day in one newspapers because of being edited and published.

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