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A special attention will be paid to the assessment of the German commercial legislation in order to identify the strengths and deficiencies of the Commercial Law and application thereof. Furthermore, the quality of services, and improvements necessary, of the judicial system services directed towards businesses will be also emphasized by ensuring a friendly legal environment in relationships with state institutions.

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You do not need the 'A' at the beginning.