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Hi everybody,

I have recived a good news about a selection for a job position,

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Dear Vincenzo,

As you will remember, I contacted you for the position Sales Engineer for our client. I would like to let you know that you have been preselected and we will try to arrange a phone interview with the company asap.

Please see the specs again attached, and I will let you know as soon as I know more.

Thanks!

JIM

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follows my reply

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Dear JIM,

Thanks for your notice, I’m still really interested in this role.

Otherwise I have just recived a job proposal for a similar role and I have about two weeks for a reply. So I would like to arrange the phone interview asap and in order to know the result, if is possible, before decide about the alternative role.

Look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Vincenzo

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Hi,

I hope this all works out well for you.Emotion: smile

Clive

Dear Jim,

Thanks very much for the information. I’m still really interested in this position.

Howver, I have just received a firm job offer for a similar role. I only have about two weeks to reply, so I would like if possible to have the phone interview and its outcome asap.

I'm sorry to rush you, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Vincenzo
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I hope too,

thank you, have been really kind.

Vincenzo