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Here is my introductory two sentences of a four page essay I have written to simply amerliorate my english skills. My english teacher looked over it and enjoyed it deeply, exept for the introductory two sentences:

It is my belief that there is absolutely no question in any subject that should not

be asked. Many people that have posed questions and attacked certain theories

have made the most important discoveries.

If anyone can edit this or completely re format it, it would be much appreciated. I hope this forum is as good as I have been told it is! ;p Thank you very much.
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Mac_ProdigyIt is my belief that there is absolutely no question in any subject that should not

be asked. Many people that have posed questions and attacked certain theories

have made the most important discoveries.

Hi,
I think that's ok, except that "question". I would use the plural, so "there are absolutely no questions in any subject".Now you have to wait for a native speaker to see if what I just said is nonsense or not. Emotion: smile
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Mac_ProdigyHere is my introductory two sentences of a four page essay I have written to simply amerliorate my English skills. My English teacher looked over it and enjoyed it deeply, except for the introductory two sentences:

It is my belief that there is absolutely no question in any subject that should not

be asked. Many people that have posed questions and attacked certain theories

have made the most important discoveries.

If anyone can edit this or completely re format it, it would be much appreciated. I hope this forum is as good as I have been told it is! ;p Thank you very much.
I have no problem with "no question in any subject", but would rephrase the second sentence: "Many of those who have posed questions and attacked theories have made important discoveries".

I am a bit puzzled by your use of "ameliorate" - what did you mean by this?
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haha my friend, relax with editting my proposal. Like almost anyone, i dont sit to edit my writting when posing a question on a forum. And if you would like a short english/french lesson, "amélioré " in french means to improve just like "ameliorate" does in plain english. I would like to improve my english, but I constantly use new words to "better" my diction. If you are in hopes of improving your english, watch BBC or ABC on television. I do not recommend CNN and much of their presentation style is quite flowry.

I hope that helped, thank you for your response.
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Hi,

In the first sentence, I find 'it is my belief' less than active in tone, and I think 'absolutely' does not add much to 'no' in this context. Style is a subjective matter, of course.

I suggest I believe there is no question on any subject that should not be asked.

In the second sentence, 'who' is better than 'that'. More importantly, the meaning seems a little 'loose'. Using your words as much as possible, I'd suggest

Many people who posed questions and attacked widely accepted theories have made some of the most important discoveries.

You also made the comment i dont sit to edit my writting when posing a question on a forum. Clearly not. If you'll permit me to say so, that seems a little inappropriate when you are writing to an English language Forum. We take care to edit our responses, as best we can, and feel that it shows respect to the people that we are trying to help.

Best wishes, Clive