It was early in the morning at four,
When death knocked upon a bedroom door,

Who is there? The sleeping one cried.Emotion: surprise
I'm angel of death, let me inside.

At once, the man began to shiver,
As one sweating in deadly fever,

He shouted to his sleeping wife,
Don't let him take away my life.

Please go away, O Angel of Death!
Leave me alone; I'm not ready yet.

My family on me depends,
Give me a chance, O please prepense!

The angel knocked again and again,
Friend! I'll take your life without a pain,

Tis your soul God requires,
I come not with my own desire.

Bewildered, the man began to cry,
O Angel I'm so afraid to die, Emotion: crying

I'll give you gold and be your slave,
Don't send me to the unlit grave.

Let me in, O Friend! The Angel said, Emotion: angry
Open the door; get up from your bed,

If you do not allow me in,
I will walk through it, like a Jinn. [6]

The man held a gun in his right hand,
Ready to defy the Angel's stand.

I'll point my gun, towards your head,
You dare come in; I'll shoot you dead. Emotion: super angry

By now the Angel was in the room,
Saying, O Friend! Prepare for you doom.

Foolish man, Angels never die,
Put down your gun and do not sigh.

Why are you afraid! Tell me O man,
To die according to Allah's plan?

Come smile at me, do not be grim,
Be Happy to return to Him.

O Angel! I bow my head in shame,
I had no time to take God's Name.

From morning till dusk, I made my wealth,
Not even caring for my health. Emotion: sad

All charities I did ignore,
Taking usury more and more.

Sometimes I sipped my favorite wine,
With flirting women I sat to dine.

O Angel! I appeal to you,
Spare my life for a year or two.

I will refrain from usury,
And give all my wealth to charity,

Wine and wenches I will detest,
God's oneness I will attest.

We Angels do what God demands,
We cannot go against His commands.

Death is ordained for everyone,
Father, mother, daughter or son.

I'm afraid this moment is your last,
Now be reminded, of your past,

I do understand your fears,
But it is now too late for tears.

You lived in this world, two score and more,
Never did you, your people adore.

Your parents, you did not obey,
Hungry beggars, you turned away.

Your two ill-gotten, female offspring,
In nightclubs, for livelihood they sing.

Breaking promises all your life,
Backbiting friends, and causing strife.

From hoarded goods, great profits you made,
And your poor workers, you underpaid.

Horses and cards were your leisure,
Moneymaking was your pleasure.

You ate vitamins and grew more fat,
With the very sick, you never sat.

A pint of blood you never gave,
Which could a little baby save?

O Human, you have done enough wrong,
You bought good properties for a song.

When the farmers appealed to you,
You did not have mercy, tis true.

Paradise for you? I cannot tell, Emotion: paradise
Undoubtedly you will dwell in hell.

There is no time for you to repent,
I'll take your soul for which I am sent.

The ending however, is very sad,
Eventually the man became mad

With a cry, he jumped out of bed,
And suddenly, he fell down dead.
Hi Salman,

Have you read Donald Justice's "Incident in a Rose Garden"? It's also about a visit from Death. I highly recommend that poem to anyone who is interested in the subject.
Hi,

I've just read your poem again. I love it, esp. the dialogues towards the end. :-)

My two cents: some of the narrative passages can be converted into dialogues. e.g. Instead of telling us the dude is afraid, the angel can comment on the man's reactions. That said, I don't know anything about poetry...

I also wonder if the story can be told in a way that never reveals whether the angel is really present. I mean, maybe the man is just hallucinating, and he ends up dying from his own fear of death or something...

Again, just my 2 cents, if worth that much. Emotion: smile
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Salman`It was early in the morning at four, When death knocked upon a bedroom door,

I wonder whether that number of death was intentional or just randomly choosing an early morning.