hi everybody,
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Dear Sara,
could you please, pass this announcement to the people from the playgroup list.

Hi everyone,

More and more people are seeking massage for stress relief and management of pain, as it encourages relaxation, improves circulation,lower blood pressure,relaxes muscles,relieves headaches and strengthens the immune system.
So if you also would like to explore the benefits to unlocking a more healthy , energetic and stress free lifestyle, the experienced, professional and certified masseur Lia Kakulia will help and serve you 7 days a week,
only please call in reservations and on the next day you will get qualified massage at your place.
One 60 min session -full-body massage- 00lari. But for the first visit you will get discount-00lari .
any questions you may have will gladly be answered by me:(in English) Ir-xxxxxxx
or Lia( Russian , Georgian, little English) xxxxxxxx

Have nice day
lela
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Dear Sara,

could you please, pass this announcement to the people from the playgroup list.

Hi everyone,

More and more people are seeking massage for stress relief and management of pain, as it encourages relaxation, improves circulation, lower blood pressure, relaxes muscles, relieves headaches and strengthens the immune system.

So if you also would like to explore the benefits to unlocking a more healthy, energetic and stress free lifestyle, the experienced, professional and certified masseur Lia Kakulia will help and serve you 7 days a week, only please call in reservations and on the next day you will get qualified massage at your place. One 60 min session -full-body massage- 00lari. But for the first visit you will get discount-00lari . any questions you may have will gladly be answered by meEmotion: sadin English) Ir-***or Lia ( Russian, Georgian,little English) ***

Have nice day

lela
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Hi,

More and more people are seeking massage for stress relief and management of pain, as it encourages relaxation, improves circulation, lower blood pressure,relaxes muscles, relieves headaches and strengthens the immune system.

So If you also would like to explore the benefits to of unlocking a more healthy , energetic and stress free lifestyle, the experienced, professional and certified masseur Lia Kakulia will help and assist serve you 7 days a week,

only please call in reservations and on the next day you will get qualified massage at your place.
One 60 min session comprises-full-body massage- will cost 00lari.
But for the first visit you will get discount-00lari .

Feel free to ask me any question you may have.

any questions you may have will gladly be answered by me:(in English) Ir-***