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Does anyone know another way to word the idea behind the phrase "which is"? I am using it way to much in this paper. Here is an example of how I am using it--for clarification:

I have high social awareness which is the ability to understand and empathize with others. I particularly demonstrate a strong service orientation which is one of the components associated with this measure.
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Hi,

Does anyone know another way to word the idea behind the phrase "which is"? I am using it way to much in this paper. Here is an example of how I am using it--for clarification:

I have high social awareness which is the ability to understand and empathize with others. I particularly demonstrate a strong service orientation which is one of the components associated with this measure.

I think you need to write this in a simpler, more direct manner.

eg I have the ability to understand and empathize with others. In particular,I have demonstrated a strong service orientation.

eg I can understand and empathize with others, and have demonstrated a strong service orientation.

Best wishes, Clive
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I have high social awareness. That is, the ability to understand and empathize with others. I particularly demonstrate a strong service orientation, which is one of the components associated with this measure.

You could use something like 'that is' or start a new sentence altogether. Further, you need a comma before 'which' because the part after it only gives additional/extra information about the preceding clause.

another way to say; There is a Difference you can see

eg There is a difference you can see between lion and tigers.

eg Lions and tigers do not look the same.

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I have high social awareness (that represents) the ability to understand and empathize with others.

I particularly demonstrate a strong service orientation (in accordance with) the components associated with this measure.

You are saying too much here, You need to be simpler and more direct.

eg

I have high social awareness (that represents) the ability to understand and empathize with others.

I have particularly demonstrate a strong service orientation (in accordance with) the components associated with this measure.