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Hi,
could you please let me know if my sentences have mistakes :

- I need to arrange my ideas before I make any decision .
- It is so miss here I hope that I have enough time to arrange it before my mother comes.
- I have to visit my father when the daylight (starts-shows up).
- She is very glad because I let her knew about using the Net.
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Thank you Emotion: big smile
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I have underlined 3 problem areas:

- I need to arrange my ideas before I make any decision .
- It is so miss here I hope that I have enough time to arrange it before my mother comes.
- I have to visit my father at daybreak.
- She is very glad because I let her knew about using the Net.
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Thank you Mister Micawber,,

let me try again Emotion: smile

- It is such a mess here I hope that I have enough time to arrange it before my mother comes.
- She is very glad because I let her know about using the Net.
Much better! 'Clean it up' would be more natural than 'arrange it'.