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Could you check my grammar in this short paragraph, please?

Volunteerism is very important to teach children about how to work with older volunteers and to behave well as a volunteer. This project aims to refresh the value of volunteerism among students from tenth to twelve grades. Many ways to instill the value of volunteerism to students by participating with organization that aims to help people and the community such as Red Crescent Group, Library Assistant and Friends of the Environment Group. While students are participating in these groups, they have lifelong learning. “Students are learning to appreciate the value of volunteerism as a way of providing essential social and human services of fulfilling personal needs, and of continuing to grow and learn” (Bard, 1999, p.13). Volunteerism teaches student or volunteer experience, skill, patience and knowledge. These aspects are enough to characterize by young students to build strong and conscious generation. Volunteerism is a part of education, which teaches students many things about life. Considering the theme of volunteerism as essential of the nation for next generation is to take the initiative in leading this nation and to instill positive voluntary behaviors. It is important to increases the effectiveness of the countries, and push this value to think carefully about how I can motivate student to be initiatives, useful member and active in the community. Skills that children acquire from voluntary work benefit and affect them psychological and educational. Especially, volunteering is a wealth of social and humanitarian value that contributes to the implantation many human values. They encourage all members of the community towards him, and children are targeted in this project.
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This is a terribly confusing paragraph. Your ideas are not well thought out or organized. Some of your sentences simply do not make sense. I would start by breaking this up. Use short paragraphs focusing on one main idea. Use briefer sentences. I have tried to make grammatical sense of your words, but this needs more work. Even when the sentences are clear, the logic of the order of your sentences is confused. Sorry. Here is one suggested remake of your essay.

Volunteerism

It is very important to teach children about how to work with older volunteers and to behave well as a volunteer. This project aims to refresh the value of volunteerism among students in the from tenth to twelve grades. Many One ways to instill the value of volunteerism to students is to by participate ing with organizations that aims to help people and the community, such as Red Crescent Group, Library Assistant and Friends of the Environment Group. While students are participating in these groups, they have gain lifelong learning. “Students are learning to appreciate the value of volunteerism as a way of providing essential social and human services of fulfilling personal needs, and of continuing to grow and learn” (Bard, 1999, p.13).

[New paragraph] Volunteerism provides other benefits. It teaches students or volunteer experience, skill, patience and knowledge. These aspects are enough to characterize by will help young students to build become a strong and conscious generation. Volunteerism is therefore a part of education, which teaches students many things about life. Considering the theme of Volunteerism also is essential of to the nation if for next generation is to take the initiative in leading this nation. It is important and to instill positive voluntary behaviors. If we wish It is important to increases the effectiveness of the countries, we must and push this value.

Given all this, we need to think carefully about how voluntererism can be used I can to motivate students to be show initiatives, and become useful members and active in the community. The skills that children acquire from voluntary work benefit them and affect advance them psychologically and educationally. Especially, In particular, volunteering is offers a wealth of social and humanitarian values that contributes to the betterment of humanity. implantation many human values. We should They encourage all members of the community to become volunteers and children most of all. towards him, and children are targeted in this project.

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Thanks Doctor for your time, I will try to make clearer.