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Hey could you please look at my draft and give revisions? Thank you.


My name is sd, and I was a senior at sd. I was dismissed from sd, and the deadline for appeal was December 21th. I contacted Dean on January 29th. I would like to explain what happened which made me miss the deadline. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to write a rationale for appealing late.


First, the only means of notification that I received was through e-mail, and I missed the e-mail. The actual letter which have been sent as internationally shipped has not arrived yet. Dean tried to call me but could not because of time difference.


At the end of December, I was suffering from flu/cold, which made me stay in bed all day. According to the medical record in the clinic, I visited the clinic on 20th, 22th and 30th,(local time) and I started to get sick the day before 19th.


Continuing onto January, my remaining anxiety issues hindered me from confronting my matters directly, namely checking e-mails. Actively checking e-mails was panicking for me. I struggled to face my matters because I was overly afraid of other people’s reaction towards my poor performance and behavior. I consulted the therapist I used to meet for years about this problem. Moreover, my parents have been still sick when I returned home after last term, and I had to work physically to help out my family and housework and was mentally preoccupied on the condition of my father. This family issue was an additional mental stress for me.


I acknowledge that checking e-mails is an important responsibility, and I am the one who is responsible to take actions before it is too late. However, I would like to note that my circumstances also have hindered me from acting promptly. I did not expect that I could be subject to dismissal, and contacted the college right away once I knew about the dismissal. I would appreciate it very much if the committee could take my circumstances into account.

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정행쇼and I missed the e-mail.
정행쇼Moreover, my parents have been still sick when I returned home after last term, and I had to work physically to help out my family and housework and was mentally preoccupied on the condition of my father.
정행쇼 I am the one who is responsible to take actions before it is too late.

The above parts are unclear. Can you rewrite them in a simpler way? Give details where relevant.