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ich muss einen application letter für ein Stipendium von der Universität schreiben. Könnt ihr bitte das Schreiben mal durchlesen und mal eure Meinung dazu sagen?
As I already had the "xxx experience" during my study abroad from May to August 2005, I would like to do my Master of Business at your university. I enjoyed the community of xxx as well as the quality of the courses and lectures. Therefore, I would like to apply for the xxx scholarship.
I am currently studying Industrial Management in Global Markets at the xxx. My major is Human Resource Management. I will graduate with my "Diplom" degree in March 2006. To deepen my knowledge and to specialise in the field of International Business, I intend to do my Master of Business. During my German studies I already gained some theoretical background about international relations, for example in the course "Training in Personal Competence" or "Industrial Management in Global Markets".
I finished my intermediate examination ("Vordiplom") with the grade "excellent" (90 points) in the German university system. Moreover, I completed an apprenticeship as an industrial clerk at xxx during my German studies. For my study abroad semester at your university I took the subjects xxx. I finished my semester with a cumulative percentage average of 80.
My career goal is to work in an international company where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in travelling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.
I worked in the public relations team at my German university until April 2005 where I took over the task of writing articles for students and lecturers. During my study abroad semester I held the position as a study abroad liasion. I really liked to be part of the xxx life.
I am an opne-minded and friendly person who is interested in international aspects and intercultural relations. Therefore, I would enjoy studying at your university which has a high proportion of international students. It is possible to get to know people from more than one country. Normally, this would require a world tour. Furthermore, I am keen on looking beyond my own nose to learn from other nationalities and cultures. Only personal experience can give you a real view of other cultures and behaviours.
Moreover, people, especially other students, describe me as a team player who cares about her group members. I am ambitious and like to handle challenging tasks and to take the responsibility for it. Therefore, I was the "CEO" for the group project in the subject xxx. To be responsible for the success of a team and to develop a "real team" was a great experience, which was an immense contribution to my further personal and academic development.
I am looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at your university and to make a great contribution to the xxx community.
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My name is Erwin from the Philippines. I just wanna ask few questions in writing my application letter for scholarship. I would also like to be your friend, if you don't mind.
Looking forward in knowing you better.
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I am Duclair. be happy to be a friend of yours. rather use my email number if you are interested. <please resgister and include your e-mail in your profile.>
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