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With due respect I request you to allow our class IX-A to go to XXX on a recreational trip. Since exams are over, we want to enjoy and relax. It is requested to kindly arrange a recreational trip. I shall be very grateful to you for this act of kindness.

(This application is written by someone else. I just want to know if the application is correct and natural which I think not the least)

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sundarnaz I just want to know if the application is correct and natura

To me, it does not sound natural.

I would say this:

As we have completed writing our exams, we would like to go on a recreational tour. We would be very much grateful to you if you could organize a recreational trip for our class ( IX A).

Thank you for your consideration.

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vsureshwriting our exams,

This is the wording used in other languages. In English people normally use sit, take or do before the word exams.

vsureshAs we have completed writing our exams,

In addition to replacing the word "writing" with sit, take or do, another possibility is to write: As we have completed our exams.

anonymousIn addition to replacing the word "writing" with sit, take or do, another possibility is to write: As we have completed our exams.

I got it. Thank you

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This application is too short