Hello, my name is Friedrich I am 18 years old and I'm going to Canada next year for a Work and Travel program. I have to apply for this job, it's in the Hotel and Tourism branch and I had to write a cover letter. So, could you please check my letter for slips in the grammar and so forth!? I would be very thankful, cuz my english isn't as good as yours.

To Whom It May Concern

I am writing to ask if there might be a vacant position in your hotel business, which I would gladly consider during my stay at your department.

Since the hotel and tourism branch arouse curiosity and interest in me, it would be one of my biggest purposes to realize these specific direction.

With the cooperation of the AYUSA Work&Travel program would I like to become acquainted to the international tourism, and also gain valuable experiences for my life career. And I am as well hoping through this external work to dedicate further knowledge and qualifications in terms of the hotel business. I expect also to extend my horizon and improve my English at the same time.

On the basis of my self-assessment, I feel myself as very motivated and purposeful, to be able to cope with a heavy workload and as well to work in a team.

I would like to work for your company a whole year beginning of January. I am flexible and willing to work in all relevant areas in your company.

One of my biggest goals would it be to find an apprenticeship in the hotel business.

At the moment I am doing an internship in an esteemed German luxury hotel, in order to prepare my practical abilities for the foreign stay.

Enclosed are resume and copies of my certificates. I would very much welcome the opportunity to function with your company and would appreciate your prompt reply. Thank you very much for your help.

Yours faithfully,

Friedrich
I have made some changes to your letter - hope that is O.K.

To Whom It May Concern

My name is Friedrich Xxxxx. I am a participant in the AYUSA Work and Travel Program, and I will be going to Canada next year.

I am very interested in gaining employment in the hotel and tourism area, and I am writing to ask if your hotel business has any job vacancies.

I would like to learn more about international tourism and the hotel business, and in the process, gain valuable career and life experience, and increase my knowledge and qualifications. I hope to also improve my English at the same time.

I am very motivated and focussed. I excel in teamwork, and can cope well with a heavy workload.

If possible, I would like to work for a year, from the beginning of January. I am flexible and willing to work in all relevant areas in your company.

One of my biggest goals would it be to find an apprenticeship in the hotel business.

At the moment I am doing an internship in a well-known luxury hotel in Germany.

My resume and copies of my certificates are enclosed. I would very much welcome the opportunity to work with your company. Thank you in advance for your assistance.

Yours faithfully,

Friedrich
The third paragraph from the end should read:

One of my biggest goals would be to find an apprenticeship in the hotel business.
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