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Are the following sentences well structured?

I will have a quiet word with him this morning and if he continues to break the head lease, then we will have to take action.

We understand how frustrating this might be for you, especially in the middle of the night. But we will do our utmost best to ensure that it does not happen again.

We apologise for any inconvenience caused.

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Please forgive me for editing the sentences rather than commenting on their structure.

  1. I will have a word with him this morning, and if he continues to break the head lease, we will have to take action.
  2. We understand how frustrating this must be for you, especially in the middle of the night, and we will do our best to ensure that it does not happen again.
  3. We apologise for your inconvenience.