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can somebody help me to know if my sentences are correct:

1- When total energy increase, power consumption increases and requires special techniques which increases system cost.

2- However, during operation mode, values for total and averge energy change drastically that can affect system performance .

3- In [19], it was shown that energy consumption of a circuit during operation mode is considerably higher, i.e. 100-200% higher, than test mode of operation.

4-Previous works have proved that a minimum power translates into minmum engery consumption.

5-In [33], the reashers propose a two step approach where values are reordered followed by an x-pationing step that minimize total engery.

6-A C-K algorithm approach was proposed in [23], however, coverage of the reordered values may have reduced coverage when compared to the original values

I hope that someone help me if there are grammar mistakes

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1- When total energy increase increases, power consumption increases and requires special techniques which increases increase system cost. Without a comma, we assume the antecedent of "which" is the plural "techniques."

2- However, during operation mode, values for total and averge energy change drastically , and that can affect system performance .

3- In [19], it was shown that energy consumption of a circuit during operation mode is considerably higher, i.e. 100-200% higher, than during the test mode of operation.

4-Previous works have proved that a minimum power translates into minmum engery energy consumption.

5-In [33], the reashers researchers (?) propose a two step approach where values are reordered , followed by an x-pationing x-partitioning (?) step that minimize minimizes total engery energy .

6- The/An A C-K algorithm approach was proposed in [23], however [23]. However , coverage of the reordered values may have reduced coverage when compared to the original values.
(coverage of the reordered values may be reduced when compared to the original values. ???)

(However, the reordered values may have reduced coverage when compared to the original values. ???)

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Hello Sarah,

I notice that these sentences have also been posted on another forum this evening.

It might be better not to double-post, in case the questions are fully answered elsewhere and further respondents therefore waste their time.

Best wishes,

MrP
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I need someone to help me if there are some mistakes in the following sentences and thanks in advance:

1- In recent work [1,13,19], researchers have shown the importance of energy minimization and its strong correlation with power.

2- work in [11, 15] proved that although the activity in the circuit may be the same, different combinations of power values still results in different energy values.

3- Many previous works targeted the minimization of energy which corresponds to number of positive power values for worst case vector pairs.

4- In [26,28], the authors have shown that amount of power drawn from supply voltage (and sunk to ground is different depending on the energy value.

5- For example, they have shown that a positive power value on the output draws approximately five times (5x) the current from power supply compared to that sunk to ground.

6- Alternately, a negative power value would result in current sunk to ground in access of 7x when compared to that drawn from the supply.

7- This means that the power plays a major role in the amount of energy consumed by the circuit , thus minimizing the number of positive power values only does not guarantee true minimum energy.

8- It can be seen from the results that power is reduced when using C-K concept when compared to the other approaches even for Y-M based ordering. For example, columns NM and HU both approaches have the same number of power (3), however, HU approach have lower power (2 for HU compared to 3 for NM approach).

9- In this work, we employed the C-K algorithm to reduce power by assigning Y bits suitable value of -1 or 1. Each Y in a vector is considered a node. Based on the initial random assignment value, all nodes associated with Y bits are placed in two partitions: 1-partition and -1-partition based on their initial fill value.

10- Algorithm HU is our implementation of filling algorithm that minimizes energy.

11- Then the newly selected vector becomes x, y is deleted from the unfilled list, and the process is repeated again.

12- In our framework, we initially randomly fill these Y bits then and reorder the input set, then we analyze these assignments for energy improvement and modify their assignments, when needed, to reduce energy.

13- Y Bits that were filled with -1 are placed in partition ‘-1’ whereas those filled with ‘1’ are placed in partition ‘1’
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