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please correct the boldface text. if you could rephrase the sentense, i'l b highly obliged. thank you. (plz identify any other mistake in the remaing text.)

Most of us are familiar with the picture shown on the previous page. This type of computer is known as Desktop Computer or Personal Computer (PC). It is known as Desktop Computer because it can fit on the top of our desk/table. It is known as Personal computer because it is designed for general use by a single person. Are there any computers bigger than our tables and for more than one person to use them simultaneously! Yes. There are..........
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Please correct the boldface text. If you could rephrase the sentences, I'd be highly obliged, thank you. (Please identify any other mistake in the remaining text.)
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I am sorry. But please help me in rephrasing the boldface text. I shall be thankful to you.
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Most of us are familiar with the picture shown on the previous page. This type of computer is known as a desktop computer because it fits on the top of our desk, or a personal computer (PC) because it is designed for general use by a single person.

There are also computers bigger than our desks and used by more than one person simultaneously.